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Fic: Rainbow's Freedom (Shadow Of The Bat Arc) (27/35)

Dec 01, 2007 00:28

Title: Rainbow’s Freedom (Shadow Of The Bat Arc) (27/35)
Author: BradyGirl
Pairings/Characters: (this chapter): Clark/Bruce, Alfred, Silver St. Cloud
Series Notes: In the 23rd century, Earth is a technologically-advanced society that practices the ancient institution of slavery. The wealthy freeman Bruce Wayne acquires a highly-prized pleasure ( Read more... )

superman/batman, shadow of the bat arc, alfred pennyworth, clark kent/bruce wayne, rainbow's freedom

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bradygirl_12 December 2 2007, 03:06:29 UTC

Bruce dressed in his finest tuxedo and looked stunning. Clark was speechless.

Ah Clark. *pets him* You are so in love.

He's terribly besotted! See, I like using that word. :)

Alfred was certain that Clark was besotted. The look of longing on his face when he looked at Bruce clinched it.

I love Alfred, he is always so good at reading people and making those feel better.

He's such a gem of a character.

Clark lifted his chin. He would serve and make Bruce proud of him.

Oh Clark, you loyal, loyal boy. See Bruce? This is what you have, don't waste it.

Poor, messed-up Bat. He values loyalty and yet can't see it!

The darkness yawned up at him as he plummeted, stray thoughts of Bruce flitting through his mind as he tried to fly, rainbow manacles appearing on his wrists and a collar around his throat, but all was lost as fire burned through his veins, melting him from the inside out as he screamed…

Evil slavers, evil, evil slavers.

Not nice people.

Encouraged by the concern, Alfred went back downstairs to the kitchen ( ... )

anonymous December 1 2007, 10:37:12 UTC

What's the matter? Or shouldn't I ask? Sorry if so. I hope you'll feel better. I do feel good because of the nice addictive story. ;-)

Will Clark find out about himself at or near the end of this arc? Or a later arc?

Angeloz

anonymous December 1 2007, 13:12:53 UTC

Is the mood indicator for the story? If so, sorry I wasn't sure. Feels silly now.

Angeloz

bradygirl_12 December 2 2007, 03:36:12 UTC

It's more my mood.

bradygirl_12 December 2 2007, 03:17:15 UTC

What's the matter? Or shouldn't I ask? Sorry if so. I hope you'll feel better. I do feel good because of the nice addictive story. ;-)

I'm glad you feel good because of the story, Angeloz! :)

Will Clark find out about himself at or near the end of this arc? Or a later arc?

Angeloz

Later. :)

greeneyelove December 1 2007, 15:51:32 UTC

I Bruce sales Clark I will NEVER forgive him!!!! Tell
Bruce!Muse that. LOL. Not that he would listen, huh?

This was great. I love Alfred. He's so understanding and kind and I adore how he just asked Bruce outright what ge was planning.

bradygirl_12 December 2 2007, 04:07:16 UTC

If Bruce sells Clark I will NEVER forgive him!!!! Tell
Bruce!Muse that. LOL. Not that he would listen, huh?

LOL! You're probably right! :)

This was great. I love Alfred. He's so understanding and kind and I adore how he just asked Bruce outright what he was planning.

Right to the point, our Alfred! :)

Glad you liked this, Green Eyes! :)

enderwiggin24 December 1 2007, 19:37:53 UTC

hugs clark! poor him, first bruce, and then those nightmares!

bradygirl_12 December 2 2007, 04:08:45 UTC

hugs clark! poor him, first bruce, and then those nightmares!

Clark is catching it from all sides these days, isn't he?

starsandsea December 1 2007, 19:46:48 UTC

Clark sighed. He was beginning to feel a little like Cinderella left home while Bruce was off to the ball. Unfortunately, there was no fairy godmother to make his collar and manacles disappear.

*huggles the woobie* (I'm sure Clark's getting fed up of my hugs by now, LOL!)

I ask that you have patience, Clark.

But how much more patience?? There's only 8 chapters left of this arc!! I'm hoping that everything will be sorted out by then, and Bruce will stop being a stupid, idiotic... *mutters*

Clark lifted his chin. He would serve and make Bruce proud of him. That is, if he was to see Bruce’s bed again.

*huggles Clark again*

“I have a decision to make. I intend to make it soon and not drag it out.”

It had better be a good decision, Bruce!

Oooooh, I can't wait for more!

starsandsea December 1 2007, 20:34:54 UTC

You do know there are other arcs? But it would be interesting to know what will be known and not known at the end. Will Clark finally know himself? Will that be the cliffhanger? Also how many arcs might there be? Enough to last forever? ;-)

Angeloz

starsandsea December 1 2007, 20:39:18 UTC

I know Brady's planing, like, 12. I just hope for a happy ending to this one.

starsandsea December 1 2007, 20:49:33 UTC

Twelve? Cool. So it might be around a long time. I'm happy. By the way I suspect the arcs might have cliffhangers so they might not be completely happy endings. I hope the last one is though. I'm just speculating of course. I hope Bruce doesn't do something silly to Clark (more than what he's done). But am willing to wait and see. If it annoys me a lot I will write about it. But I do expect silliness from the boys before they get to be happy. I hope (for the happy part). Assuming a non-evil writer or story. But a little evil is to be expected. Sorry if I'm rambling.

Angeloz

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