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Fic: Rainbow's Freedom (Shadow Of The Bat Arc) (23/35)

Nov 15, 2007 22:35

Title: Rainbow’s Freedom (Shadow Of The Bat Arc) (23/35)
Author: BradyGirl
Pairings/Characters: (this chapter): Clark/Bruce, Jim Gordon, Edmund Caldwell, Harrison Caldwell
Series Notes: In the 23rd century, Earth is a technologically-advanced society that practices the ancient institution of slavery. The wealthy freeman Bruce Wayne acquires a ( Read more... )

jim gordon, superman/batman, shadow of the bat arc, edmund caldwell, clark kent/bruce wayne, rainbow's freedom

Comments 19

greeneyelove November 16 2007, 03:53:10 UTC

Oh poor Bruce. I feel so bad for him and Clark. It's an unfair world they live in.

Bruce's terror was so vivid and real. The details in the nightmare were chilling.

Wonderfully done.

bradygirl_12 November 16 2007, 04:12:23 UTC

Oh poor Bruce. I feel so bad for him and Clark. It's an unfair world they live in.

Very much so!

Bruce's terror was so vivid and real. The details in the nightmare were chilling.

Wonderfully done.

Thank you, Green Eyes! I wanted to evoke his terror and I'm glad I succeeded.

anonymous November 16 2007, 05:38:11 UTC

Bruce when will you acknowledge your fears but get comfort and support from Clark? You silly man. You're just twisting yourself up even more failing to do this.

On another note will Clark get to try something new maybe after the Joker is caught? Are you going to give us details?

Lastly thanks for another chapter in the addictive story. More soon? ;-)

Angeloz

bradygirl_12 November 16 2007, 05:57:47 UTC

Bruce when will you acknowledge your fears but get comfort and support from Clark? You silly man. You're just twisting yourself up even more failing to do this.

Must be a Bat-thing! :)

On another note will Clark get to try something new maybe after the Joker is caught? Are you going to give us details?

You never know what these boys will get up to! ;)

Lastly thanks for another chapter in the addictive story. More soon? ;-)

Angeloz

There will always be more! :)

stalinglim November 16 2007, 12:26:15 UTC

*meep!*

Oh noes! NOES!

(glares) I want it happy..... ah well. So long as it doesn't REALLY happen, we're all good.

But I wonder- Bruce has hidden SO much in his life, whats one more thing?

bradygirl_12 November 17 2007, 01:52:30 UTC

*meep!*

Oh noes! NOES!

(glares) I want it happy..... ah well. So long as it doesn't REALLY happen, we're all good.

Yes, a nightmare is better than reality!

But I wonder- Bruce has hidden SO much in his life, whats one more thing?

He'll come to that conclusion soon. :)

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bradygirl_12 November 17 2007, 01:53:46 UTC

Evil Joker, he really needs to be stopped.

Joker is not a nice man!

And that dream was so chilling and horrific, talk about a nightmare.

*shudders*

Brillantly done.

Thank you, Louise! :)

jeannev November 16 2007, 17:40:39 UTC

Oh man, this just isn't going well for Bruce. With The Joker running amuck, and his feelings for Clark overwhelming him, not to mention his fears....Its just a tough time to be our caped crusader. And tough times for him means tough times for Clark, who can't possibly understand whats going on, or why his beloved master is pulling away from him.

*sad for the boys* :(

bradygirl_12 November 17 2007, 02:06:53 UTC

Oh man, this just isn't going well for Bruce. With The Joker running amuck, and his feelings for Clark overwhelming him, not to mention his fears....Its just a tough time to be our caped crusader.

Extremely tough times! He wasn't very happy during these chapters. Rather grumpy, actually. :)

And tough times for him means tough times for Clark, who can't possibly understand whats going on, or why his beloved master is pulling away from him.

Of course Clark thinks he's at fault! Poor baby.

*sad for the boys* :(

I know! But things will get better before this arc is over. :)