Songwriting...
I've been writing again.
Here's some songs
Let me know what you think
what you hate
and what can you relate from and so on...
One Last Minute
If I knew we'd be closely attached
I would of been smiling awhile ago
And if I had to let things change
I wouldn't be able to touch a thing
Laughing is the type of motion
That's got me spinning
closer into your arms
and this is where my ability takes control
just when we are crumbled up
telling our most guiltiest pleasures
and hitting the dust
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so we're driving to the next exit
and it wouldn't matter if we were stuck on the same roads
for miles and miles
just let me have one last minute
riding around your backseat
the window holds a picture of us
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would you take me out
don't bring me back home yet
the stars are still up
and wishing they would stay still
would only make it possible
so go on and tell me
how close we are to be
the time we lost
our friendship would take the lead
like a clear sky
you were there
holding the lights
leading me in the right guide
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so we're driving to the next exit
and it wouldn't matter if we were stuck on the same roads
for miles and miles
just let me have one last minute
riding around your backseat
the window holds a picture of us (sing 2x's)
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just one last minute...
I wouldn't want to be taken away..
(song fades out) *Dedicated to my good friend Alissa.
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Other Than Yours
What you've done
I could never forgive
You played those games
I know
Because I played them before
And all of that consumption
Could Over weigh
But I'd still go in any direction
Other than yours
You thought I was oh, so in love
And you muddled my words
Seize up your confession
But don't think you'll be eased
You have a price to pay
There's no redemption
to the world you portray
hurry up and give me something I can fix my eyes on
you were just there liking the attention
and nowhere else by far and wide
could be the way I fondled your restriction
That's when the "maybe's" and the "worries" start pulling up
And I'd figure I'd get into such a state of mind
Deliver me some constant relief
But you don't see
How I see
So what's the point?
hurry up and give me something I can fix my eyes on
you were just there liking the attention
and nowhere else by far and wide
could be the way I fondled your restriction
(Bridge)
You could have been my candlelight
You burned so bright
And once the flames ignite
I'd had your back
I'd had your back
and that was my first crime
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Here's some songs
Let me know what you think
what you hate
and what can you relate from and so on...
One Last Minute
If I knew we'd be closely attached
I would of been smiling awhile ago
And if I had to let things change
I wouldn't be able to touch a thing
Laughing is the type of motion
That's got me spinning
closer into your arms
and this is where my ability takes control
just when we are crumbled up
telling our most guiltiest pleasures
and hitting the dust
--------------------------------------------------------
so we're driving to the next exit
and it wouldn't matter if we were stuck on the same roads
for miles and miles
just let me have one last minute
riding around your backseat
the window holds a picture of us
---------------------------------------------------------
would you take me out
don't bring me back home yet
the stars are still up
and wishing they would stay still
would only make it possible
so go on and tell me
how close we are to be
the time we lost
our friendship would take the lead
like a clear sky
you were there
holding the lights
leading me in the right guide
--------------------------------------------------------
so we're driving to the next exit
and it wouldn't matter if we were stuck on the same roads
for miles and miles
just let me have one last minute
riding around your backseat
the window holds a picture of us (sing 2x's)
---------------------------------------------------------
just one last minute...
I wouldn't want to be taken away..
(song fades out) *Dedicated to my good friend Alissa.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Other Than Yours
What you've done
I could never forgive
You played those games
I know
Because I played them before
And all of that consumption
Could Over weigh
But I'd still go in any direction
Other than yours
You thought I was oh, so in love
And you muddled my words
Seize up your confession
But don't think you'll be eased
You have a price to pay
There's no redemption
to the world you portray
hurry up and give me something I can fix my eyes on
you were just there liking the attention
and nowhere else by far and wide
could be the way I fondled your restriction
That's when the "maybe's" and the "worries" start pulling up
And I'd figure I'd get into such a state of mind
Deliver me some constant relief
But you don't see
How I see
So what's the point?
hurry up and give me something I can fix my eyes on
you were just there liking the attention
and nowhere else by far and wide
could be the way I fondled your restriction
(Bridge)
You could have been my candlelight
You burned so bright
And once the flames ignite
I'd had your back
I'd had your back
and that was my first crime
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