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blaqkheaven October 15 2010, 19:23:12 UTC
I like the start, seems like it could be a strong story.

The spacing kinda bothers me.. are you spacing twice between words?

Because it looks like you are.

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bowsie22 October 15 2010, 20:25:30 UTC
Yeah, it's something left over from college. Sorry. Thank you for reading :D

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ayamiyeli October 16 2010, 02:57:54 UTC
Oh I'm very interested to see where this goes to! lol at puck and mike! its the first i've ever head or that shipping, it sounds very smexy ;D I can't wait to read more!

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bowsie22 October 16 2010, 10:14:55 UTC
I love Puck and Mike. I think they'd be awesome together :D

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bowsie22 October 16 2010, 10:15:56 UTC
Glad you like it. Thanks for reading :D

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