Fic : Aftermark, Part 2 of 2 (Hotch/Reid, NC-17)

[bowie28]

Recipient: S.Reid

Message Content: Motel at 10, same room. I’ll show you what I’ve done. If you still wanna talk afterward, we’ll talk.

Status: Delivered

Hotch knew the knock, the force applied, the pauses in between. It was their code.

The whore had done what he’d been told. Hotch’s eyes scanned the combination of the outfit

Comments

[fabrisse]

Definitely Porn WITH a Plot and a point. It's very good.

[bowie28]

Thanks! So glad to see one of my fav H/R writers here. <333

[jomk]

This was wonderful. Painful, sweet, sad as hell, honest. I felt as though I were on a wave, riding it, helpless to turn or change the tide. It was an excellent journey. Thank you.

[bowie28]

I'm a sucker for brutal honesty. I love fluff too but I find angst stay with me longer. Thank you for such a heartfelt comment. I'm glad the porn didn't scare you away. I knew it'd happen with some people, but that comes with writing smut fics. Hee. &hearts

[daylyn]

Oh wow. This was awesome. Tragically sad yet hopeful too. The feelings here were so poignant, so heartwrenching, and so perfect. Wow again.

[bowie28]

Whoa, two 'wow's. I'm so glad you liked it that much. The idea struck me since the beginning of S5 but I'd waited for Hotch's storyline to wrap up before actually writing anything. I'm glad it worked out. The first draft was horrific, believe me. Never rewrote anything that much and that long, lol. Again, thanks for the awesome comment. <333

[sophie301]

:O this was amazing. Dark and angsty but beautiful and happy -ish - at the end.

The porn was well written, the characters are perfect and the situation works amazingly.
Love love love.

[bowie28]

Glad you thought everything worked out well. I've never worked on any fic this long. Took me almost two weeks to finish a 7,000-word story, lol. Writing porn always dreads me (though I love reading smuts, hee), so I'm glad that worked out too. Tried not to be too clinical about the details. That sometimes killed the mood.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Love love love. :)

[enmuse]

Typing from my phone so forgive typos.

This was intense! Hell of a ride here, I'm with jomk's comment. There are a number of great lines in here. I think my favorite lines are during the dialogues after teh sex in the last scenes. Reid strikes me as being particularly well presented here. (no worries, Hotch is believable too!)

Keep up the fantastic work!

[bowie28]

Hey you! I'm glad the porn rating didn't scare you away. As for the angst, I looked through all my old fics (in other fandoms too) and I found most of them belong in angst category rather than fluff/romance. I think it's just the way I operate as a writer. I write stuff that's stuck with me even after a long period of time which is pain and struggle. I love fluff and happy-kissy-I-love-you-baby couples too, but I don't think I'd write those as well since the concept doesn't motivate me as much.

Thanks for reading and commenting. I've been waiting for your 'Shook the Bones' series too. No pressure though. I know you've got a lot on your plate. &hearts

[enmuse]

I definitely know what you know mean about angst/struggle. I prefer some of that before the happy ending. =) I think there's the appeal of writing better endings for difficult things that can happen in real life. =p

Anyway Shook the Bones is going awful for me! The muses have abandoned ship so I'm completely lost! *sobs* I really need some direction. Finishing NaNo seems to have totally thrown me off. I'm really frustrated about it. Do you happen to have ideas / requests/ suggestions? I'm falling apart here, heh.

[bowie28]

Oh, that sounds awful. I know what it's like when muses decided to leave you. It happened to my other OTP too. I'd love to help out but I need to reread your series to get ideas/suggestions/requests. Hang in there. :)