bike bag
okay, so i'm designing myself a bike bag to order from r.e.load bags, something i've been planning to get for a long time now.
because my creative abilities are severely impoverished (and may never be restored), i've made recourse to a few graphic elements i seem never to tire of.
although i like it (obviously i would, as it is comprised entirely of things i like), it seems almost too ridiculous to be allowed. the main point is that, although i've learned in time to really love texas and have really come back into the fold of america through this state, i'm not FROM texas per se. so there's that.
also, the design might just look too garish and played out.
anyway, i repost it here to get some perspective from anyone who wants to offer it:
thoughts?
because my creative abilities are severely impoverished (and may never be restored), i've made recourse to a few graphic elements i seem never to tire of.
although i like it (obviously i would, as it is comprised entirely of things i like), it seems almost too ridiculous to be allowed. the main point is that, although i've learned in time to really love texas and have really come back into the fold of america through this state, i'm not FROM texas per se. so there's that.
also, the design might just look too garish and played out.
anyway, i repost it here to get some perspective from anyone who wants to offer it:
thoughts?