The Truth is Out There?--SPN fic

Nov 11, 2010 20:45


Title: The Truth is Out There?
Author: borgmama1of5
Summary: Once in a while, things work out right.
Spoilers: none; can be anytime
Wordcount: 900
Disclaimer: Not mine, or I would feed them pie.
Gen, no pairing
Rating: G

I really didn't want to believe. )

dean winchester, sam winchester

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twirlycurls November 12 2010, 03:05:57 UTC
This was such fun! I love your OC and the outsider POV. I love getting an inside look at how various people Sam and Dean work their magic on are reacting to them and all their various charms and tells.

I really didn’t want to believe.
I insta-flashed to Fox Mulder here. Intentional?

Dean smiled at that, and it transformed his face from scarily intense to meltingly brilliant. Clearly a compliment to his brother was better than saying something flattering about him.
Both a perfect description of Dean's best smiles and a fantastic bit of characterization. I love it when outsiders realize how much Dean loves Sam.

I love the ending, too. This is a lot of awesome for just 900 words. :)

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borgmama1of5 November 12 2010, 03:18:39 UTC
Thank you!

Never watched X-Files, although I know the catch-phrase.

I just wanted something nice for the boys tonight!

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vanillafluffy November 12 2010, 03:07:49 UTC
Great outsider POV! You might also consider posting it to bystanderfic.

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borgmama1of5 November 12 2010, 03:19:16 UTC
Thanks for the suggestion! I will. I am fond of outsider POVs.

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tifaching November 12 2010, 03:43:04 UTC
LOL, even OC's recognize Sam's proficiency at the bitchface! Loved this, especially Mrs. Crawford's compliment to Sam lighting Dean up.

Awesome!

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borgmama1of5 November 12 2010, 04:17:17 UTC
Thanks! Wouldn't it be awesome to get a look at the boys from the outside?

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callistosh65 November 12 2010, 03:59:58 UTC
That was a very nice slice of outsider POV - and a welcome shot back to S1 - thank you!

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borgmama1of5 November 12 2010, 04:19:45 UTC
Thank you! I just wanted to give them something easy for a change!

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datenshiblue November 12 2010, 04:14:50 UTC
That felt exactly like an encounter with our boys, really, at any time.

I enjoyed it very much. <3

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borgmama1of5 November 12 2010, 04:20:47 UTC
Thanks for stopping by to read!

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