48-hour fic!

May 21, 2009 10:47

Prompt: "she was unwilling to substitute fascination for trust, or beauty for sincerity" from Carl Steadman's 99 Secrets via intl_princessThis is The Mentalist. Lisbon and Jane working. Jane pov (which is fun because he knows everything ( Read more... )

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mandysbitch May 21 2009, 03:52:54 UTC
So, so awesome! You know I love The Mentalist, you know I love Jane and Lisbon and you have to know I was gonna love this from the start. But aside from that, I just love how understated they are, how fraught with history and angst and stuff going on that they don't talk about. It's so them!

I love the Lisbon volunteers. You're right - what else would she do?

and I don't know why, but this:

He knows she is both fascinated by and fearful of him. He thinks she also likes him.

Just seemed so Jane to me.

(Also did you prompt furies okay?)

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pene May 21 2009, 05:05:14 UTC
hooray! I'm so glad! hooray!

I did know I would have at least one audience member.

y'know I really wanted them to fall awwwww in loooove um... sappy romantic me. and also have sex. guh. but I reckon that would take a lot of writing because they're so fraught.

my current plan is to have someone in femslash09 write me a crossover where Lisbon and Reese from Life are sexily ever after. Sneaky and hot.

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pene May 21 2009, 05:17:05 UTC
p.s. I prompted her by email but haven't heard if she got it. she may still be flying?

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mandysbitch May 21 2009, 06:36:23 UTC
Yeah, I won't panic yet.

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pene May 21 2009, 05:22:05 UTC
p.p.s.

"what else would she do"

I considered having her play some sort of team sport. with beer. that would also be cute. but... a little too like my life :)

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mandysbitch May 21 2009, 08:50:45 UTC
No, not team sport. She's too much of a loner. I could see her doing martial arts or something but not as a member of a team. she's not a joiner. But there would definitely be beer somewhere.

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