24 Fic: Dinner Date, Tony/Michelle

[bookworm0503]

 Title: Dinner Date
Fandom: 24

Characters: Tony Almeida/Michelle Dessler

Rating: NC-17

Summary: Michelle’s had a long day at work and Tony decides to make it up to her.

Author's Notes: Sooooo…this is a very delayed birthday!fic for my dear sweet 

Comments

[astrum_presul]

Heeeeeee!!! *tackle* THANK YOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUU.

Guuhhh, they're so hot. And so good to each other. Him making her dinner was so sweet, especially after one of those rough days with Ryan. And guuuhh, just the way he teases her and she teases him right back. I looooovveeee it. And then when he's close and he's just like pleading with her. His dammit was so Tony. :D

And hahahaa, not worrying about the neighbors. When Michelle moved out she probably had a list of complaints the office manager hadn't had the heart to tell her about, 'cause they thought she deserved to get some action.

And OHHHH white shirt, messy hair, sweaty Tony is so hottt, gah.

And and and, when she just gets up and sits in his lap and they kiss for a little while. Loved that. :D

And their in-kitchen makeout before dinner after she'd changed into the nighty. :D Epic. He's just like "hours I spent cooking? What hours I spent cooking?"

In other words, I LOOOOOOOVE IT :D Thank you so muuuuuuch! <3

[bookworm0503]

:D:D:D

Hahaha. Yay! They're hot even when they aren't trying to be I think. It's innate. They got the hot gene the both of them. (I'm studying genetics today so we'll learn all about the hot gene when I do, okay?) And no lie, I love it when Tony begs.

Bahahaha. The office manager knew how badly she needed to get laid. And then they saw Tony and went "oh...I'm not ruining *that* for her". Tony transcends sexuality boundaries (what with the hot gene and all), you don't need to be into him to appreciate him.

Guhhh. Yes. And the flushed cheeks. *licks*

He's just so sweet to her. She wanted to um...y'know...but she also wanted to just be sweet and cute and thank him for slaving over a hot stove for her. It made for good scenery anyway

Bahahhaa. Yesssssss. One track mind that Tony Almeida.

:D Yay! i'm so glad. And I'm sorry it took me eons to get out. <3 Happy Birthday L. Spoon.

[toothfairy00]

Aw. Guh. Awww. Guhhh. Awwwwww. Guhhhhhh. (This is a demonstration of my reactions while reading this fic. I felt it was important to add them in the review. I always like to be thorough :P

[bookworm0503]

Hahahah. I appreciate you being thorough. Believe me

[yaboiksar]

Wow. If that's what you do for birthdays I can find someone each day who's celebrating one.

Jeeeeeeebus.

[bookworm0503]

Hahaha. I believe there was discussion of celebrating half-birthdays. I dunno about everyday. The damn thing took me about 2 weeks. Haha.

:D Glad you liked it.