A Game of Poker, Chapter 36: Goodbye, My Almost Lover
Title: A Game of Poker
Author: Bookkbaby
Rating: Teen
Warnings: YAOI
Summary: LUCKY Pair. It started as a simple game of poker, but a little white lie from Lavi changes everything. ['If you lose... you spend the night here, with me, and let me do whatever I want with you.']
( Chapter 36: Goodbye, My Almost Lover )
Author: Bookkbaby
Rating: Teen
Warnings: YAOI
Summary: LUCKY Pair. It started as a simple game of poker, but a little white lie from Lavi changes everything. ['If you lose... you spend the night here, with me, and let me do whatever I want with you.']
( Chapter 36: Goodbye, My Almost Lover )
You have done well if your goal was to make your readers hate Alex with a burning, fiery passion because I know all I wanted to do was kick him in the balls every time he opened his mouth! I can feel bad for him and his situation (his friend dying, and all), but there comes a point when enough is enough! >:(
Don't get me wrong, I'm most definitely sad to hear that AGoP is getting close to the end, but I don't think I can handle much more of them being separated!! It's too painful! For them AND for me! That being said, I think you've done a marvelous job in capturing their emotions and reactions in this portion of the story.
And I wanted hug Allen's lil' neck, bless his heart! At least there's someone that can still run referee since Tyki and Lavi can't/won't speak to one another! Though, Bookman's musings at the end does give me some hope, so I've got my fingers crossed!!
As far as a sequel (**has voted in the poll already!), I know I would love to hear more regarding Leverrier's infernal plot (I love to hate him; it's so easy since he's such an ass!) and how it shall be thwarted. The man needs to get what's coming to him anyway! And a little Yullen from you is always nice, so my vote's for that as well! ;)
'Til next time!
nikita :)
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I hope you enjoy the rest of AGoP as much as you've enjoyed the fic up until this point. I'm glad you think that I capture their emotions well. I try.
It looks like there will, indeed, be a sequel! ^_^
I'll be posting chapter 37 later tonight! Thanks for reviewing and I hope you enjoy!
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And you're very welcome! Can't wait to read the next chapter! ^_^
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