Comments | bookaddict43: Gone, and a cloud in my heart

bookaddict43

Gone, and a cloud in my heart

Oct 07, 2011 14:40

Title: Gone, and a cloud in my heart
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 133
Comment: written for The H50 Beatlemania prompt-fest. 2nd person POV ( Read more... )

steve/danny, drabble, hawaii five-0

Comments 10

camille_miko October 7 2011, 08:08:02 UTC

OMG ! So right and so painful... Poor Steve TT__TT

bookaddict43 October 7 2011, 23:48:41 UTC

Thank you!

jazzybabe56 October 7 2011, 16:25:48 UTC

oh.....wow ;___;

♥

bookaddict43 October 7 2011, 23:49:14 UTC

Glad you like it! :)

magicgerbil October 7 2011, 17:52:53 UTC

Ohhh....that's beautiful. Sad and perfect.

bookaddict43 October 7 2011, 23:49:41 UTC

Thank you! :)

gem1n12505 October 7 2011, 19:22:44 UTC

<3 breaking but so true

bookaddict43 October 7 2011, 23:50:13 UTC

I could see Steve doing this *hugs him*

n0m_de_plum October 8 2011, 21:14:14 UTC

You know I'm writing a fic basically about this same thing, and it really bothers me. Danny's comment in the season 1 finale that he doesn't have a life in Hawaii, while blatantly not true, is half-right in the sense that, based on the way the show portrays the arrangement with Rachel, he CAN'T have a life...period.
I mean even assuming he's straight, he couldn't be with anyone, he couldn't remarry like Rachel because what if Grace left? That makes me so mad because of how unfair it is.