Mininano entry 18
Only about 370 or so words today, but still writing...If only RL and procrastination didn't intervene *mourns*
Here's a little bit (very scattered) of The Message rewrite.
“Cow guts!” Jayne was outraged. “I paid that (Needs a chinese swear word) five bits and we’re looking at cow guts. I want my coin back.”
Kaylee grabbed his arm as he headed out the door. “Now Jayne, don’t cause any trouble. We’ve still got to fence the Lassiter - and anyway I kind of like Old Bessie there.”
“Cobb,” the postmaster greeted. “There’s a parcel for you and a crate for Reynolds. Where is he?”
“Captain’s busy right now,” Kaylee did her smiley, dimply thing. “We can sign for it.”
Jayne wasn’t paying attention to her working her girl type wiles being too busy shaking his box. The postmaster gave in like every fella who ever met Kaylee did and let her sign the form
~~~~~
“Why’d we have to bring the gorramn body back here with us?” Jayne demanded. “There ain’t no profit in dead bodies ‘cept to sell them for experiments and we can’t do that at this here skyplex.”
“Jayne!” Kaylee’s lips twisted in revulsion. “He might be dead, but he’s still a person and something to do with the Captain.”
“Trust Mal to get a body sent to him,” Jayne grumbled. “There’s probably some sort of trouble attached - you know that don’t you?”
Here's a little bit (very scattered) of The Message rewrite.
“Cow guts!” Jayne was outraged. “I paid that (Needs a chinese swear word) five bits and we’re looking at cow guts. I want my coin back.”
Kaylee grabbed his arm as he headed out the door. “Now Jayne, don’t cause any trouble. We’ve still got to fence the Lassiter - and anyway I kind of like Old Bessie there.”
“Cobb,” the postmaster greeted. “There’s a parcel for you and a crate for Reynolds. Where is he?”
“Captain’s busy right now,” Kaylee did her smiley, dimply thing. “We can sign for it.”
Jayne wasn’t paying attention to her working her girl type wiles being too busy shaking his box. The postmaster gave in like every fella who ever met Kaylee did and let her sign the form
~~~~~
“Why’d we have to bring the gorramn body back here with us?” Jayne demanded. “There ain’t no profit in dead bodies ‘cept to sell them for experiments and we can’t do that at this here skyplex.”
“Jayne!” Kaylee’s lips twisted in revulsion. “He might be dead, but he’s still a person and something to do with the Captain.”
“Trust Mal to get a body sent to him,” Jayne grumbled. “There’s probably some sort of trouble attached - you know that don’t you?”