Fanfic: Happy Father's Day.

[book_of_sail]

Series: Watchmen
Characters: Little Walter, Adult Walter, Rorschach
Pairings: -
Rating: PG13 for mention of whoring, violence, and child abuse.
Summary: When you've never had a dad, what is this holiday supposed to mean?
Caution: You are reading an unbeta'd version.

This fic was meant for the holiday, but wasn't finished on time. Therefore it's a

Comments

[sepulchre_angel]

WOWW. This was really, really good. I loved everything about it: the voice and the pacing and how you communicated the transition from bb walter to kid walter to teen walter so on and so on. It was really enjoyable. And I have to say, the image of little bb walter running to the door to see if his daddy's finally home made me really really sad. :(

[book_of_sail]

T-thank you for an encouraging comment!! This whole thing is really rough and unfinished, and I'm always a little unsure of the stuff I write. You have given me hope! *beams and rolls around in dandelions*
I'm really, really glad to hear that the narrative transitions are doing okay~ Hopefully it'll still work out when I start going from Walter to Rorschach. 9___9;
I'm sorry that disappointed bb Walter made you sad. :( Unfortunately I can't tell you it's going to get any better. Sad fic is sad, and also bitter.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment! (Feedback is like the lifeblood, lol...)

[cannibalklok]

In my own personal canon, Major Dick Winters is totally Rorschach's dad. ( http://ordtolax.files.wordpress.com/2008/09/damien-lewis.jpg ) Hehe. I love your story, and I really hope that there will be more. I would love it!

[book_of_sail]

OH MY GOD, that picture explains everything. o____o
I'm stuck between lolzing at the similarity, and nodding my head in srsbznz agreement.

Thank you for the comment~ I'm glad you're enjoying it. :3
There will definitely be more, and hopefully soon.

[cannibalklok]

Oh! The next part gutted me ;_;

Poor baby Walter. I wanna gather him up and cuddle him and shove him into Winter's arms "TAKE CARE OF HIM!" -wibbles-

[book_of_sail]

Writing all of this absent-father turmoil is making me want to do a fixit afterwards. D: