Pin Drabble Theme #20

Oct 12, 2007 23:18

New theme, thanks to swtjemz.

The Pin Drabble Thing!

Theme No.20: DANCE!

No blurb. Too busy watching clips of Jin and Pi moooooove *__*

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my very first drabble... anonymous October 13 2007, 19:16:38 UTC
my very first time writing fanfic...its not as good as alot of fanfics out there but hope its okay.

Jin couldn’t help but compare their love to a dance

Work was their music. Work was the place they met, became friends, got close. Work started it all; started it in the same way music allows for dancing, gives it pace and rhythm.

It has hard to separate them after they became friends. It was hard to find one without the other. Regardless of different groups and different activities they always made time for each other. Their friendship surged; it was uncontrollable. Crescendo. Friendship grew, evolved faster and faster -the tempo, quickening of a beat.

Yamapi was serious in front of people; Jin often acted dumb and happy. When they were alone Jin cried. When they were alone Jin told him he wanted to leave it all, leave work, fame just for a little bit. When they were alone, Yamapi made stupid faces to make Jin laugh, offered him a shoulder when nothing else worked; encouraged him when he wanted to leave. BalanceSix months in ( ... )

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Re: my very first drabble... anonymous October 13 2007, 19:19:06 UTC
i was unsure about posting this so um critiques and opinions and stuff please. heh
thanks for reading
~jeebs

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Re: my very first drabble... lelola October 16 2007, 02:45:56 UTC
Between the vocabulary and its lyrical-ish style, this was kinda like music~ :3

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Re: my very first drabble... anamuan October 20 2007, 04:16:10 UTC
I really like this. It's like a giant analogy.

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Re: my very first drabble... ununoriginal December 19 2007, 00:04:16 UTC
this was really nice! :)

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