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[mananeh]

Breather week! Here's a chance to catch up on anything you might have missed~

THE PIN DRABBLE THING CATCH UP WEEK III!

Theme No. 11: FIRST KISS!
Theme No. 12: MIRROR!
Theme No. 13: COMPETITION!
Theme No. 14: POOL!
Theme No. 15: REALITY!
Theme No. 16: COSPLAY!

Read any drabbles you missed! Drabble here for any of the themes so far! No

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hello procrastination, my name's anita

[wintersjuly]

When Yamapi looks in the mirror, all he can see are the imprints of Jin, Jin, Jin written all over him; under his skin and in his flesh, penciled in by Jin's inky eyes and the aching sharpness of want and loneliness.

He wonders if it's that obvious to people that he misses Jin like crazy.

(Yes, Ryo would say bitingly, but he wouldn't mean it because he misses Jin too)

-- I seem to be quite attached to the idea of Jin leaving and the angst he leaves behind. Go figure.

Re: hello procrastination, my name's anita

[lelola]

When Yamapi looks in the mirror, all he can see are the imprints of Jin, Jin, Jin written all over him; under his skin and in his flesh, penciled in by Jin's inky eyes and the aching sharpness of want and loneliness.
Oh, I love this line. The imagery and the implications...

I seem to be quite attached to the idea of Jin leaving and the angst he leaves behind. Go figure.
I also am a little invested in the idea of Jin leaving, because his departure can serve as a catalyst for all sorts of things -- the realization of the space left behind, and the realization of so much more.

Anyway, this is lovely. :3

Re: hello procrastination, my name's anita

[pashoshi]

Well, I'm intrigued by the idea of Jin leaving behind angst too, so it's okay. This is really prettily written, and sad in a very...real-feeling sort of way, if you know what I mean.

Re: hello procrastination, my name's anita

[anamuan]

short but beautiful

Re: hello procrastination, my name's anita

[araanaz9]

Nitaaa! *heart breaks* So sad, but so beautiful.