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Jun 10, 2007 23:23

Breather week! Here's a chance to catch up on anything you might have missed~

THE PIN DRABBLE THING CATCH UP WEEK III!

Theme No. 11: FIRST KISS!
Theme No. 12: MIRROR!
Theme No. 13: COMPETITION!
Theme No. 14: POOL!
Theme No. 15: REALITY!
Theme No. 16: COSPLAY!

Read any drabbles you missed! Drabble here for any of the themes so far! No ( Read more... )

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Reality "drabble" pashoshi June 11 2007, 22:19:09 UTC
This is so disjointed it's not even funny, but...oh well. I blame my brain for being a strange and confusing place. Also, ignore that bit of totally-not-Pin-related stuff that ninjaed in in the middle.

Yamapi dreams about Jin, standing back to back with him, singing. The rest of NEWS is around them (he can’t tell how many). He feels strangely light-headed, and he doesn’t know if it’s excitement at performing or something about Jin’s back against his, both of them singing with all their might, or if maybe something’s wrong with him, even in a dream. But even with his head spinning, he thinks that maybe this is how it should be.

* * *
Yamapi wakes up to voices, and he thinks he hears Jin, but Jin would never use words like “delirious”, so it must be someone else.

“Will he be all right?” the other voice asks, and he knows it’s his mother.

“As soon as the fever breaks,” not-Jin says. Yamapi wonders who they’re talking about.

* * * Yamapi dreams of performing again, but this time he’s with 4 Tops in a concert of their own ( ... )

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Re: Reality "drabble" saturnianlove June 11 2007, 22:34:19 UTC
“Don’t be dumb,” Hasejun says. “Who else would you have debuted with?”
cries.

I really liked this. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Re: Reality "drabble" lelola June 11 2007, 23:29:01 UTC
Yamapi’s pretty sure this isn’t real, but he doesn’t mind pretending for a bit. Sometimes, sad as that may be, dreams make more sense than the reality.
sdfgsb fgsdfgdag adgasdf 4Tops love! ;______;

He can’t think of the name, but he knows that it’s real and it’s permanent (really permanent, not like NEWS, not like all the groups he’s been in that never lasted), and he’s happy because it’s Jin, after all, so how could he not be?
I liked how you worked in these little hints at Pi's career and what could have been.

Anyway, this was love! ♥

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Re: Reality "drabble" araanaz9 June 12 2007, 04:00:15 UTC
I love it. I love it so much. There is something about the way it's written, and of course you know I love your writing style, but this is different. I felt like I was dreaming too and the world was spinning around me. Yes, I love it.

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Re: Reality "drabble" wintersjuly June 12 2007, 08:07:55 UTC
*flails*

Oh Ilana, I love your fic. I would be more coherent, but I've just had a lot of coffee.

♥ ♥ ♥

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Re: Reality "drabble" anamuan June 13 2007, 08:22:30 UTC
not like NEWS, not like all the groups he’s been in that never lasted
I like this line

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