[4] Drabbles

Mar 26, 2011 20:33

As he watched Hyukjae’s jaw drop slowly, Yesung thought that this was definitely one of his more brilliant ideas. He watched the dancer’s throat move as he swallowed.

“Hyung-you-what?”

Yesung smiled, maybe a little too darkly, and Hyukjae suddenly looked nervous. “Let’s watch some porn together.”

“B-but,” Hyukjae stuttered, distressed, “ ( Read more... )

pairing: jino/jonghyun, character: kyuhyun, character: eunhyuk, character: jino (smtb), character: jonghyun (shinee), pairing: kyuhyun/donghae, pairing: yesung/donghae, character: yesung, media: fanfiction, character: donghae, pairing: yesung/eunhyuk

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rubyls March 29 2011, 01:25:02 UTC
GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. OH MY GOD. I TAKE BACK EVERYTHING I SAID ABOUT NOT CARING THAT IT'S ONLY A DRABBLE. WHY ARE THESE ONLY DRABBLES? you really know how this tease thing works alskjflaskdf OH GINA THE YEHYUK. I - CANNOT.
"I can just give you-“ what?? "my personal porn collection"? "head"??? oh god why do you do this to me
oh god i'm really really really happy with the yehyuk anyway even though its only a drabble and would the flashfic you're talking about mean THAT little thing you wrote in a comment in my journal, because if not then i want to read it. AND YES STILL LACKS A COMPANION PIECE, I'M GLAD YOU NOTICED THAT TOO. NOW WE WOULDN'T WANT THAT, WOULD WE? IT'D BE ALL LONELY AND STUFF.
some serious stuff, i really liked the premise and especially so because it's in a drabble and leaves the reader hanging and wanting more. suspense is a great technique and perfect for drabbles. this actually goes for the jino and jjong one too :DDD

CROSSDRESSING JINO HOW IS THIS SUPPOSED TO COMPUTE. JINO AS BATGIRL, I CAN'T. jjong as shaggy, oh god. aslfksdfasfd um really dying now guys please take a video of yourselves having fun at the party you should share the fun!!

okay the yehae. i. you - how are you. GAHHHHH. that picture of yesung did things to me and oh god your drabble based on that and YEHAE WHICH I ACTUALLY SHIP LIKE BURNING BUT NOBODY WRITES AND UGHHHH OMG i'm so happy its not slash and just d'awww-ish, adorable friendship and it's all mellow and summery and just quietly sweet asdl;sjdf i'm going to just make away with these drabbles and like hide them in my cookie jar so i can have them all to myself.

the kyuhae, i actually choked on my spit AUUGGHHHH. CAN YOU QUIT DOING THIS TEASING NOW AND LIKE ACTUALLY WRITE PROPER FIC 100/200 WORDS JUST DOES NOT CUT IT. also ooooh kinky i haven't actually come across a kinky kyuhae piece and it actually surprisingly works vey well indeed. lasjfsalsdf all the touches, the ghosting whispers of contact and then BAM donghae is all over kyuhyun, aksdlaf i love this i love this i love this.

i've always read only angsty drabbles because it feels like angst is harder hitting in the 100/200/whatever word limit instead of other genres but you pulled all of them off beautifully and thank god because i don't actually like to read angst most of the time at all. LAKSDASDF THANK YOU BB I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE YEHYUK AND YEHAE ONES and the other two are just perfect. perfect. :D

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