[Actually, some of that had been almost flattering, and it's Angela who might require the stronger apology for having been pimped out by a friend. Today on the other hand.]
This is fictional? It sounds like you're writing from personal observation.
[There's no way in hell Brennan is going to broach that topic with Angela. Nor Chase, any further. She can only hope Chase won't mention the "pimping out" to Angela - she will not ask. No matter how good the intention may have been, the execution was all wrong. If you can avoid something, it won't exist, right?]
No, it's... it is. Well, the execution of certain... events are. I grant that some things mentioned are observational facts, but not all of them.
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Well, that was hardly constructive criticism.
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Neither was yours.
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I'm confused as to what you mean. Are you still sore about that penis talk few days ago? Should I apologize?
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[Talking through a wince makes words clipped and tight.]
That was a curse, and I assume this is another. I'm not sore about anything.
[Lies.]
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[A moment of semi-awkward silence. She doesn't usually have a problem with silence.]
And I hypothesize you're correct. I don't normally feel such compulsion to write fictional accounts about real persons. Especially my friends.
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[Actually, some of that had been almost flattering, and it's Angela who might require the stronger apology for having been pimped out by a friend. Today on the other hand.]
This is fictional? It sounds like you're writing from personal observation.
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No, it's... it is. Well, the execution of certain... events are. I grant that some things mentioned are observational facts, but not all of them.
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