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i've found that it absolutely impossible to write more than one post per a day here. don't know why. may be maybe because of parallel fb activity. may be because of my old rule " only one post during a day". i don't know.
so i didn't do this writing practice for almost week and now feel myself guilty.
but i had a time to think about my mistakes. and i understand that one sort of mistakes is about style. for many years lj posts were not writing written but mostly oral type of speech for me. that's why i'm not sure that all you have marked are the real mistakes. but they could be. i'm not specialist.
anyway thank you for you comments. i need them and they are very helpful. don't leave me please:)
so i didn't do this writing practice for almost week and now feel myself guilty.
but i had a time to think about my mistakes. and i understand that one sort of mistakes is about style. for many years lj posts were not writing written but mostly oral type of speech for me. that's why i'm not sure that all you have marked are the real mistakes. but they could be. i'm not specialist.
anyway thank you for you comments. i need them and they are very helpful. don't leave me please:)