Comments | bohemian_lover: FF: Are We There Yet?

bohemian_lover

FF: Are We There Yet?

Sep 17, 2006 18:33

Are We There Yet?
By Jocelyn Brant
Pairing: Sara/Sofia
A/N: Part of the State of Undress fic-a-thon for Sofia/Ohio - not beta'd, so take that into consideration.
X-Posted: On

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fanfic, csi, sara/sofia

Comments 21

obfan4ever September 18 2006, 02:53:38 UTC

I loved this. Taking chances is never a bad thing. :)

bohemian_lover September 18 2006, 03:03:35 UTC

I have to admit risks kick my ass, and blow up in my face, but one day one of my risks won't be so ill-fated, and that day will be sooooo sweet!

obfan4ever September 18 2006, 03:22:06 UTC

Yeah, my risks are the same. It's nice that Sofia's risk was not ill-fated, lol.

ariestess September 18 2006, 03:00:45 UTC

*giggles* That rocked!

bohemian_lover September 18 2006, 03:03:54 UTC

Thanks! That's a huge compliment coming from you!

ariestess September 18 2006, 03:11:07 UTC

You're welcome!

nixie_noo September 18 2006, 08:57:00 UTC

I loved this :)

bohemian_lover September 18 2006, 19:55:43 UTC

Aww, thank you!

mia_charlize September 18 2006, 10:46:05 UTC

Beautiful. I love the pace you set with this, very fitting.

bohemian_lover September 18 2006, 19:55:23 UTC

Thanks! I wanted to write a kissing scene but I think the conclusion of this story, taut with anticipation, was the best way to end it. Something tells me that Sara might be a bit uppity, despite her earlier teasing, when it would come to kissing Sofia. It's Sara, after all. Not to say that Sofia isn't incredibly persistant, and persuasive.

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bohemian_lover September 18 2006, 19:52:32 UTC

Me, too! Nothing like serveral hours on the road to force intimacy on people.