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Legacy (2/?)

Feb 15, 2011 04:12

Title: Legacy (2/?)
Author: bobojr (Sorrow)
Characters/Pairings: OFC; reference to Kahlan/Richard; eventually Cara/Kahlan; Berdine/Raina
Fandom: Legend of the Seeker
Overall Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, Adult Situations, Violence, Blood and Death
Word Count: 4,782
Disclaimer: I do not own the "Legend of the Seeker" show or the “Sword of Truth” ( Read more... )

fanfiction: berdine/raina, legend of the seeker, fanfiction: cara/kahlan, fanfiction: ofc, femslash, user: bobojr

Comments 22

musicffyou February 15 2011, 04:46:26 UTC

wow! What is going on...man this stops are killing me. Upload more please!

bobojr February 16 2011, 05:28:44 UTC

That is a good question, which I won’t answer of course. :P

The stops are unintentionally deliberate, if that makes any sense. lol

Will upload the next chapter as soon as it’s done. ;)

chickinwhite February 15 2011, 07:59:51 UTC

Poor girl! She has a real living hell out there... And stands a lot. I can´t wait for whats coming...

bobojr February 16 2011, 05:28:02 UTC

Living hell sounds about right. lol

‘Stands a lot’? *confused* ^^;

I can´t wait for whats coming...
But you will have to, because the next chapter isn’t done yet, sowwy. ^^;

chickinwhite February 16 2011, 10:14:28 UTC

Ahh, sorry, my words aren´t always the best choice... :)
to stand sth= to bear sth= to endure...etc etc etc. (there are so many different meanings sometimes... :)

bobojr February 16 2011, 14:51:36 UTC

Oh! ^^ I see. I pondered on what it could mean, but the meaning eluded me. Thanks for explaining. :D

Always up for learning new things, so use whatever words that come to mind. ;)

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jecica84 February 15 2011, 13:43:22 UTC

Very entertaining... And the little confessor is so cute!

bobojr February 16 2011, 05:26:50 UTC

Yeah, the little one is a cutie. *^^* Hope I can keep you entertained with the next chapter as well. ;)

dig this! lavalkyrie February 15 2011, 16:38:15 UTC

i heart my traditional LOTS characters, but I am thoroughly enjoying the breath of fresh air your new character brings... especially in her post-apocalyptic world. you've got me wondering who she is and how we story will relate to our fantastic four. bravo.

Re: dig this! bobojr February 16 2011, 05:26:21 UTC

Thank you! :D Was worried my writing of the canon chars was off. It seems that will be a challenge for me. ^^

Taryn and her dying world fascinate me. If I thought I could get away with it, I would write more about it. lol

You’ll get a few answers in the next chapter… I think. ;)

Re: dig this! lavalkyrie February 16 2011, 12:09:53 UTC

well it is hard to know if they're off yet as we've only gotten a glimpse of them. but taryn is totally badass and i think you could easily "get away with" writing more about her world. i look forward to the coming chapters.

soulsearchr February 15 2011, 17:59:07 UTC

This chapter was great, too!

I think you are really great at the action scenes> :D
And I'm also enjoying your character.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Thanks for sharing!

bobojr February 16 2011, 05:22:55 UTC

Thanks! And thank you for reading. ;)

It’s the action that feels easiest to write. For some reason I could go on and on describing what happens during those scenes. But give me a little girl and a Mord-Sith and I stumble over my words. lol :P

Where I first thought there would only be one new character added to the mix, we now have two. Ashley will play her part nicely I think and I’ll add another one next chapter. Don’t know how that will turn out. You’ll have to be the judge of that. :P