Belated Easter Greetings!

[veiledndarkness]

Title: The Art of Easter Eggs

Comments

[bring_ur_knives]

this made me smile :)
especially the line: "She supposed that in a few years, she’d have to keep a closer eye on those two."
you seem to be the only person spinning out Jack and Bobby fice :(
thank god you're an amazing author or i'd die!

[veiledndarkness]

thanks..i get a little depressed sometimes when i see the lack of fic out there for this pairing. i figure it'll pick up sooner or later.

[newtoyou]

aw, cute :)

bobby coloring eggs is adorable.

arts and crafts are so excellent to write stories about. i love it.

very cute-

i think there's one or two typos in this Jack nodded, his eggs shinning with happiness.

but other than that, it's so cute i just can't stop smiling.

[newtoyou]

This is really cute. I love how Jack followed Bobby everywhere.

One thing you will have to fix is starting a new paragraph whenever a different person has a line of dialogue. You should never have two people speaking in the same paragraph, it gets really confusing.

[veiledndarkness]

you know it's funny you mention that because when i first started posting fic, someone complained that i was doing the opposite of how i write now. i used to space everything apart to avoid confusion, and they said that they couldn't tell who was speaking..lol..i think i'll revert back to spacing just to make it easier on the eyes. thanks :)

[veiledndarkness]

shit...i always miss one or two typos..thanks for pointing it out. i usually double check everything, damn that spellchecker..

anyway, thanks, the idea of Bobby working so carefully on his eggs makes me smile.

[zoeingreece]

First of all...hooray! A story, and a good one at that! I am so behind, so I'm just going to comment on this one story of yours for now =)

Evelyn watched the look on Jack’s face with a small tendril of unease making its way through her stomach. The look was one of …worship. It made her nervous. She wasn’t sure exactly what to make of it. She gave a soft smile then. She supposed that in a few years, she’d have to keep a closer eye on those two.

Oh my! You capture that perfectly! It's totally what their relationship is about!

After a moment, a soft, steady voice said “Go suck an egg Jerry!”

Aww! I can totally see Jack sitting there, with his wild hair flopping over his face and telling that to his brother! I love it!

Such a cute story! Hooray! =)

[veiledndarkness]

lol thank you...i'm in the middle of writing a long, very dark fic for this pairing and i decided to cheer myself up with this bit of Easter fluff.

[anonymous]

this is real well written you have to write some more following along
the same lines as this one

[veiledndarkness]

thank you..i'm not really a 'fluff' writer, yet i keep producing these short fluffy bits. i'm already considering making a few more that occur around Jack's first few years in the Mercer home, with him around this age of about 11 or 12. the line from the movie about how Bobby should have been around longer to be something like a father figure to Jack stuck with me..lol..let's see what happens.

[the_lady_revan]

I Love your stories! Thank goodness your still writing Bobby/Jack stories :)

My two fav lines have to be:

She supposed that in a few years, she’d have to keep a closer eye on those two.

and,

“Go suck an egg Jerry!”

Thanks for sharing

[veiledndarkness]

lol thank you..i like to write for other pairings too, but i always come back to Bobby and Jack. They hand around in the back of my mind..lol