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Dec 10, 2007 00:27

title: Learned Your Name Without Words
rating: NC-17
prompt: unrequited love
summary: Thnks Fr Th Mmrs. Frank/Bob, 10,810 words.

The first time it happens, Frank just thinks that Bob is being a passive-aggressive asshole. )

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postcardigan January 3 2008, 11:04:11 UTC
oh my god this is good. perfect combination of slightly ridiculous idea and excellent execution. gonna cry some more now.

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ninjajab January 6 2008, 04:10:00 UTC
ahahhaha. fag.

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lovelypoet January 3 2008, 19:57:17 UTC
I don't know that I have anything coherent to say, really. But this is great. The way you handled Frank realization that he had to let go just hurt my heart so much.

I don't really know why, but Frank's thought at the end, the "You idiot, now you're not going to remember..." thought, really hit me. And I don't know if you meant for it to read this way, but I like the feeling that it was Bob's decision to confront Frank *without* Frank having done anything that made him able to remember. Like, he needed some semblance of control over the situation that he didn't ever have when he was just being informed of what was going on or reacting to Frank's kissing him. Pretty much when I realized that Bob was the one who instigated the confrontation and the kiss, I figured out that was going to be the time it didn't vanish (and not just because I was getting close to the end and desperate for a happy ending). It felt... right.

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vic_ramsey January 3 2008, 20:21:48 UTC
This was fantastic. I might have teared up in a couple of places. And you made me realize how much I love the Frank + Gerard friendship.

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overloved January 3 2008, 20:24:03 UTC
oh, god, wow!

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pearl_o January 3 2008, 20:40:02 UTC
Oh, god, honey, this was amazing. I love it.

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