Fic: Wrong Turn, Chapter Three of Three

[bob_fish]

Last chapter of my fma_ihop kinkmeme fic for sara_rojo. First chapter is here, second chapter is here. I had a ludicrous amount of fun writing this, so thanks for the prompt, Sara! I've ended up having so much fun with these versions of the characters that I'm very tempted to get to work on a sequel - in which of course I'd be honour bound to resolve some of this

Comments

[sarasusa]

Wow! I love this story, from the pee-lantern to the shifting POVs with corresponding personalities properly reflected to the subtly delivered UST.

Moar please! If you would!

[bob_fish]

Thanks! I hesitated about the pee-lantern at first but now can't imagine why I did! I will be working on moar.

[sky_dark]

This rocked socks on the meme! <3

[bob_fish]

Thanks - so glad you enjoyed!

[cryogenia]

This last chapter is what seals this as brilliant. So few authors who get Hawkeye's POV right. She is all kinds of intelligent and analytical and powerful, and she manages to be concerned and loving without becoming weighed down by sentimentality.

[bob_fish]

Hoorah and thanks - glad you liked, mememama! I found Hawkeye a bit more challenging to write than the boys because her voice is a bit quieter and subtler, but I just love the character. It was particularly fun to bring out her snarky side a bit.

By the way, I should say thanks so much for your work running kinkmeme! I had a blast, it got me off my bottom writing, and I'm sure I'm not the only new writer who appreciated the non-scary, fun atmosphere, so thanks for some great hosting and memecare!

[jokerlove]

Love this story why have i not seen it before? prolly my bad oh well i see it now and i likes it much! the internal debates are really funny and in character! its really great total feel for the characters. definatly not a could never happen fan fic, i really think this could happen so far! keep it up! ^_~

Love,
Joker

[bob_fish]

Hoorah, thanks! Part of the prompt was try and keep the characters as canonical as poss, so I did my best.

[became_fire]

Well I've already commented in the kink meme how much I loved this story, but I'll just say it again! The characterisation is great, I loved all 3 perspectives and I really hope you do write a sequel!

[bob_fish]

Woo-hoo, thanks! Lovely comments always appreciated. Sequel is in the works - the idea I have is quite plotty, so I'm trying to pin it down first so I don't write myself into a corner. But there will definitely be action, comedy and ho yay!