Fic: Entregarme, Chapter Three of Three

Oct 24, 2011 16:30

Title: Entregarme, Chapter Three
Authors: a_big_apple, sky_dark and bob_fish
Characters: Roy/Ed, Al/Riza, ensemble
Rating: R this chapter
Word count: 5891 this chapter; 19, 934 total.
Summary: Welcome to the Central City Charity Dance-off. Where Roy sees an opportunity to take his relationship with Ed public via a classy tango, Ed sees an exciting new venue for brotherly ( Read more... )

[fanworks] fic, [fandom] fullmetal alchemist, [pairing] roy/ed, [chapterfic] entregarme

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lazylamia October 24 2011, 20:26:07 UTC
I wish I was there watching them dancing - Ed in his sunny outfit (absolutely not looking like ruffly banana) and Roy clad in black - they must be incredible (I admire Roy's capability to calm Ed in every situation, even if the but the method was debatable ;))
And their later conversation - well, Ed is really romantic trying hard not to be romantic at all - but that's part of his charm.
This story is wonderful - thank you :)

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bob_fish October 24 2011, 21:05:39 UTC
I love Ed's unromantic way of being romantic. Despite himself, he's a total charmer. Thanks! So glad you enjoyed! We had a ton of fun writing this.

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havocmangawip October 24 2011, 22:28:51 UTC
I LOVE how you played with this world. BLTA was one of the first fanfics I ever read. I love your characterization and take on it authors!

BRAVA!

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bob_fish October 24 2011, 22:39:28 UTC
Apple and I are big fans of BLTA too. It was a ton of fun to play in Sky's 'verse. ♥

Thanks, glad you enjoyed!

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sexkitten426 October 24 2011, 23:19:02 UTC
Music + sex = win. Even after all that, neither of then won! I just loved all the details from BLTA. You three are an amazing collaborative team.

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bob_fish October 25 2011, 05:56:17 UTC
Thanks so much! Apple and I are huge BLTA fans, so it was fun to work with the details of the 'verse (Ed's students, RD, Sarah - who I keep trying to convince Sky is totally the alt-Rebecca).

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sky_dark October 25 2011, 12:30:07 UTC
I wrote Rebecca before Rebecca was cool, and I didn't even mean to

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a_big_apple October 26 2011, 00:45:26 UTC
You're totally a Rebecca hipster!

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amethyst_koneko October 25 2011, 02:45:12 UTC
*applauds wildly!!* Pure win from beginning to end! \o/ This fic has just made the BLTA 'verse that much more awesome! :D

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bob_fish October 25 2011, 05:57:11 UTC
Thanks so much! Apple and I were really excited to get to play in Sky's 'verse. The three of us had a lot of fun writing this, so I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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brinylon October 25 2011, 07:24:00 UTC
I loved The hell out of this! The crack, The sex, The cute, it was all there.

I'm happy neither Elric won, now they can commiserate together on how they were robbed ;p I also wonder what kind of ring Ed is going to end up with if Roy gets a diamond one? I foresee skulls. And Roy is in the best shape he's been in years.

Your styles mesh wonderfully well together! I kept thinking I recognised bits but then doubted again and in the end I would not take a bet on knowing who wrote what. Awesome stuff , guys, thanks so much.

(written on the iPad so amusing misspellings are its fault)

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bob_fish October 25 2011, 21:59:20 UTC
YAY that you enjoyed so much. Sky and Apple decided during AWA that no Elric could win. XD

I think Ed would totally buy himself a skull ring, but Roy would get him something far more tasteful. I actually wrote that in another 'verse - it was something like this. As for Roy's ring, I think he'd take no chances and tell Ed exactly what (as he does in this fic). XD

I'm glad our styles meshed so well! It was so so much fun to collaborate on this.

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brinylon October 26 2011, 08:50:48 UTC
That skull ring is amazing! Ed needs it badly. I wonder if Roy could bring himself to buy it for Ed.

I remember your tungsten carbide ring fic (I'd been looking at tungsten carbide rings before I read it, they are very cool).

BLTA Roy and Ed are a bit more flamboyant, in my fic world they would never, ever get rings with stones. (My rigidity is not helping with my writing ;p)

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bob_fish October 26 2011, 12:25:41 UTC
I know, the skull ring is so very Ed. I think Roy would refuse to get it and Ed would end up buying it for himself (for a non-wedding finger) as a celebration for finishing a research project.

Ed: Look, isn't it AWESOME?
Everyone else: ...

Haha, I think Wrong Turn 'verse Roy wouldn't go with a ring with a stone either. He'd want a super-plain band and Ed and he would argue over whether this was 'boring' or not.

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