Fic: The Day After Tomorrow

Oct 31, 2010 18:29

Title: The Day After Tomorrow
Characters: Ed/Ling, mentions of Ed/Win UST, Greed 2.0, Darius, Heinkel
Rating/warnings: NC-17 for very awkward train sex
Word count: 5452
Setting: Mangaverse, two days before the Promised Day
Summary: Thirty-six hours to the eclipse, and Team Greedling are still bickering.
Notes: Written for fma_fuh_q's Ling round. Thanks to ( Read more... )

[fic series] wrong turn 'verse, [fanworks] fic, [fandom] fullmetal alchemist, [pairing] ed/ling, [odd tag out] pointless smut, [odd tag out] ling, [fic series] camping trip of doom

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bob_fish October 31 2010, 20:57:52 UTC
I love them, I really do.

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t3h_toby_chan October 31 2010, 22:56:13 UTC
Blee! :D I so love the epic camping trip, and that you've returned to it. I just can't even describe how melty your version of Ling/Ed makes me feel.

(Your "Oh Ling" tag is so appropriate. There's really not much else to say there, is it?)

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bob_fish October 31 2010, 23:08:41 UTC
Ling is so special. *smooshes him* I love writing them scaling new heights of awkwardness.

Thanks!

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vwl October 31 2010, 23:59:12 UTC
<333 They are getting ducks there, I presume?

Very, very lovely (as always), and thank you for posting to remind me that I have to post my picture. XD

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bob_fish November 1 2010, 09:02:14 UTC
Oh yes. You inspire me. ♥ I don't know how far it worked, but I tried to write that bit so you could read them as a long-standing couple if you liked. :D

Thanks! I look forward to seeing what's under the sign saying PENIS. The mystery is killing me.

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vwl November 1 2010, 14:09:21 UTC
You know I love those two. TOGETHER FOREVER~ <3 <3 <3

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bob_fish November 1 2010, 14:30:12 UTC
I know, the thought of them with anyone else is just a bit wrong. I hope they catch lots of trout.

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seatbeltdrivein November 1 2010, 00:22:25 UTC
Man, I was totally cringing at the 'ripping of the foreskin' talk. Ouch.

There's something about awkward sex that's just awesome. I love the dynamics you have between Ling and Ed and, well, all of them! Greed being so far from in control, Darius and Heinkel pretty much just existing--very awesome.

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bob_fish November 1 2010, 09:08:54 UTC
I know. Ling is such a doof to think this talk of assassins and sex injury isn't going to put Ed right off.

I ♥ awkward sex scenes. I'm really not sure why, but I do.

I feel so bad for Greed here (especially considering how personable and fun Greed 1.0 would have been in the same situation) but he does make it tougher for himself trying to throw his weight around so much. He's like a stroppy thirteen year old. *pats him*

Thanks!

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a_big_apple November 1 2010, 03:38:53 UTC
HAHAHA, that was hot and hilarious and lovely! The sarcasm! The fumbly sex! The sweetness, oh, I want to snuggle into a mailbag bathtub nest with them forever.

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bob_fish November 1 2010, 08:54:16 UTC
I know, they are such cute little saps. And totally badass and determined and manly, of course.

Thanks!

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a_big_apple November 1 2010, 11:18:41 UTC
I think maybe that's what's so great about them in general, they really are all those things!

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