Fic: No Small Injury, Chapter Eight of Nine

Jun 16, 2010 14:52

Title:No Small Injury, Chapter Eight: Some Things Never Change
Setting: Fullmetal Alchemist, mangaverse, post-series, yet plotted out way last year, so potential spoilers only up to around Ch 100. Hence: contains NO 108 spoilers, and potentially AU.
Characters: Roy/Ed (UST and subtext), Havoc/Rebecca, Al, Hawkeye, ensemble.
Warnings: R for sweary ( Read more... )

[fandom] fullmetal alchemist, [pairing] havoc/rebecca, [chapterfic] no small injury, [pairing] roy/ed, [fanworks] fic, [fic series] wrong turn 'verse, [odd tag out] just freaking kiss already, [fanworks] art

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enemytosleep June 16 2010, 17:15:20 UTC
So much love for this chapter. Let me start with some quotes:

You know, Fullmetal, I'd agree with you, but the way you're putting it is so obnoxiously intolerant I don't want to be on your side any more." Aw, Roy wants to be on Ed's side. ^_^

I still think this qi stuff is suspect, I reckon Ling used to just make it up half the time to get his own way -"

Al whistled. Ed tutted, and smacked him on the back of the head lightly. What was that about? Wouldn't you like to know, Roy? Heh.

"They're in pain," said Al. "Like, if a cat's hurt and it'll go crazy if you go near it?" Oh Al and his expertise on approaching injured cats on the street XD

"I thought I heard a noise upstairs!" [Katezenklavier] waved his fork upwards. Then he carved off a bit of chicken, dipped it in mustard and popped it in his mouth. What a bastard! And Poor Roy - his sudden intrusion is hardly noteworthy to this guy - he's not even getting up or moving to protect himself from the Hero of Ishbal!

"Wood? Nice choice, you dick." I love you, Ed

"I know, but I was hoping to score a cheap point." You were hoping to score, Roy Boy? *cackles Maes' style*

Now for the spewing, sticky beta love explosion:

There were several LOL moments in this one. Seriously, I was bursting out laughing in the middle of Bob's movie - lots of fun banter and wit throughout. I really enjoyed it.
I forgot to say how much love I have for the Al/Riza dome. XD Nice tease there (as for the comment about being in the truck in the woods with Miles ... and the team, heh). Ed snorting at the Roy/Riza teamwork is so cute - they are dorky when being badass, though. Ling using his cool qi detecting skills to scam sex things ... and sex ... is awesome.

FIST BUMP OF LOVE!!!

And in conclusion, the Elrics are the epitome of practical fashion.

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bob_fish June 16 2010, 20:01:23 UTC
Roy will work out the Ling thing eventually. And Ed is going to run out of world leaders to get jiggy with at this rate. XD

Al must have found approaching cats on the street way easier when he had big leather gauntlets with no sensation in them. I love his Nausicaa moment with Xiao Mei biting his finger. He's plainly had that happen before. I want to write a drabble where a grouchy cat goes nuts on his flesh-covered ass. XD

I'm glad there was wit. I likes wit. Roy and Riza are so dorky yet badass. They looked so damn cute when she was aiming him like a gun, and they did this awesome back to back thing in Brotherhood a few weeks ago (while fighting Goldtooth's minions) that wasn't in the manga.

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Take two enemytosleep June 16 2010, 20:58:35 UTC
Roy will work out the Ling thing eventually.

:D

Haha, yeah, I imagine picking up stray cats is a lot easier when you are 100% impervious to their attacks. XD Ed will like you for writing that drabble - it'll be a nice break form you writing all his awkward sex adventures.

They are cute in their badassery. Can't blame Ed for snorting at all. XD

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Re: Take two bob_fish June 16 2010, 21:05:20 UTC
Haha, but I did enjoy the humungous text.

I have not forgotten the drabbles about Ed's awkward sex adventures. I need to finish Al v. Sook Joo too - I didn't manage to get it in for 'wilful' and couldn't make it fit 'token'. It's basically 200 words of him emitting pwned squeaking noises while she does nice/nasty things to him with pinwheels and clamps.

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