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bob_fish

Fic: Keep Your Fork

Dec 29, 2009 23:52

Title: Keep Your Fork
Characters: Ed/Winry
Setting: mangaverse, post-Promised Day.
Word count:1053
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Coy references to sexytimes, innuendo stretched to breaking point
Summary: In their kitchen, my parents have a mixing bowl - a wedding present to them - that's printed with the words "küssen vergeht, kochen besteht." ( Read more... )

[fic series] wrong turn 'verse, [fanworks] fic, [fandom] fullmetal alchemist, [pairing] ed/win

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evil_little_dog December 30 2009, 02:15:33 UTC

AHAHAHAHAHAH.

That's really adorable.

bob_fish December 31 2009, 01:41:41 UTC

Thanks! I was going for adorable with a side-order of smutty, or perhaps the other way around. It always strikes me that Winry will be quite a firecracker (in a very wholesome way) once she gets her hands on the goods.

evil_little_dog December 31 2009, 02:56:46 UTC

Oh, I agree. *nod nod nod*

cornerofmadness December 30 2009, 05:09:44 UTC

haha that is really long for dialogue only and it worked really well. this is so cute

bob_fish December 31 2009, 01:43:33 UTC

Thanks! Re. the length, OMG tell me about it! I wrote it as a fun extra promptfill but due to a late drop-out it turned into a pinch-hit, so instead of cutting it to 500 words I had to stretch it out past 1000. The cheap jokes came easily, but trying to communicate what the hell's supposed to be going on got difficult.

cornerofmadness December 31 2009, 06:10:34 UTC

I'm sure it did. You pulled it off though

bob_fish December 31 2009, 08:24:40 UTC

Thanks!

enemytosleep December 30 2009, 16:18:41 UTC

hehe, they are so cute together. I loved the alchemical geekery re: the ozone as a by-product.

bob_fish December 30 2009, 16:43:41 UTC

Thanks! So fun to write Ed geeking out. Did you spot the filth? Everyone else has said aww and not commented on all the ridiculous innuendo at the start.

enemytosleep December 30 2009, 16:46:13 UTC

Well I was wondering what exactly was going on with the rubber glove (and what "goo" was going to get into his automail joints). XD

bob_fish December 30 2009, 16:55:01 UTC

They're making pastry. For the pie. But I held off on that part of the recipe for the first few lines so you'd wonder. Does the recipe extract not reveal it properly? Damn, it was so funny in my head. Writing 1000 words of dialogue-only with smutty implications is hard. And I had to write out a lot of giggling from both of them.

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bob_fish July 21 2010, 20:30:55 UTC

XD But not really conducive to keeping track of how long something's been in the oven?

sister_coyote November 17 2010, 01:02:03 UTC

I missed this when you first posted it (working my way through the backlog), but it made me grin like a lunatic. Fantastic!

bob_fish November 17 2010, 09:36:32 UTC

I had much fun beating the innuendo to death here. I has a fic and art index these days if you want to check out any of my ridiculous back catalogue.