Anyway, so I just edited the majority of Chapter One... and can't exactly remember what I edited on Chapter Two (But it was edited because I had it titled under R2. =] ). This was about... two months ago. Might as well post them now.
Chapter Three is coming along nicely. I've finished the draft, now I just need to let it sit for two days while I brag about it. Then come back to realize that It. Is all. Utter. Crap. =D
Here's Revised Versions:
Chapter One: The Queen is Dead, Long Live the Queen Chapter Two: Political Union [For the Sake of Duty] Hmm.. I want to start a sword-fic community. There's a sword-rpg community, but no sword-fic community. *needs shiny graphics*