Firefly: Isolation

[bluflamingo]

Title: Isolation
Author: bluflamingo
Fandom: Firefly
Rating: PG-13
Words: 4522
Feedback: Yes please. Even if it’s bad. Especially if it’s bad.
Disclaimer: No, I don’t own them. To my profound disappointment.

Summary: Strange passengers, engine malfunctions, inappropriate remarks from Jayne... situation normal on Serenity.

A/N: Written for spook_me; prompts at the

Comments

[mab_browne]

I liked the crew interaction here, and the low-key creepiness of it all.

[bluflamingo]

Thank you :)

[gryphonrhi]

Oh, wow, wonderfully creepy! Thank you, this was lovely!

[bluflamingo]

Thanks!

I love your icon btw

[gryphonrhi]

Very welcome! And the icon was made by cereta, and it's free for sharing so long as she's credited! She did a bunch of them, and I snagged Zoe and Teyla (from SGA).

[bluflamingo]

Cool, thanks.

[ionaonie]

Loved it. This is creepy all the way through.

Zoe kicks ass. Of course she just shoots Dara when she doesn't like the answer.

My two, sorry, three, favourite bits are first when Zoe and Mal hit Jayne without even looking up from their food. Second when Mal is being all concerned for Kaylee, stroking her hair and stuff. And third, when Wash calls Kaylee Mei-Mei.

It was pitch perfect in character, something that is especially hard to do in Firefly, in my opinion.

[bluflamingo]

Thank you!

Zoe kicks ass.

Always - Zoe's so cool :)

It was pitch perfect in character

Thank you - I really struggled writing this, so that's especially nice to hear.

Excellent Characterization...

[army_rat]

This was a very nice story. But I have to say that the dialogue was WONDERFUL! You really caught the flavor of the way that each character on the show spoke.

Thanks

Re: Excellent Characterization...

[bluflamingo]

Thank you!

[ozsaur]

I love the suspense! I had no idea what was going on until the end. Enjoyed this very much!

[bluflamingo]

Thanks, I'm glad it worked for you!