SGA: The History of an Alliance (Teyla/Sora)

[bluflamingo]

Title: The History of an Alliance
Author: bluflamingo
Fandom: SGA
Pairing: Teyla/Sora
Rating: PG-13
Words: 1885
Feedback: Yes please. Even if it’s bad. Especially if it’s bad.
Disclaimer: No, I don’t own them. To my profound disappointment.

Summary: Building an alliance between two peoples takes time... A pinch-hit for mdashed for femslash07

Comments

[lilysaid]

oooh, so good. You totally captured the tone of exactly how I see their relationship, past and present. Really good stuff.

[bluflamingo]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I've never really thought about them as a pairing before, so it's nice to hear that it worked.

[bluflamingo]

Thanks!

The bunny scene was the best thing ever, by the way. We shall have it for dinner indeed.

They're definitely not 'girly' girls - that's what I like about them, I think.

[leksa]

Oh, I like this. And, have to agree with the previous commenter, the rabbit bit at the beginning is awesome and really sets the tone for the whole story right there.

[bluflamingo]

Thanks! The rabbit was a throwaway to show they're not 'girly' even as kids, so I'm glad it worked.

[viciouswishes]

So very good and so hurtful. I like it. :)

[bluflamingo]

Thanks! I can't seem to resist hurting the charactes, unfortunately :)

[sheepfairy]

Excellent! I think you've gotten the tone of their relationship perfect, and it just adds so much to the inevitable betrayal.

[bluflamingo]

Thank you! I've never really considered them as a couple before I wrote this, and now he whole Genii plot seems totally different - I think that's what I like about fic (mine and mostly other people's)!