[fic] can you come down with us

Jul 10, 2013 01:21

Title: can you come down with us
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Luffy/Nami (maybe?)
Word Count: 1815
Notes: Birthday fic for weissofthecorax. Set pre-Sabaody because I like skirting the edges of doom.

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chesuto September 17 2013, 17:08:24 UTC
Oh my gosh, hiiiii. I haven't read any of your fics in a while. But wow. Wow. This is amazing. ;___; I--I don't even know where to begin my review. T___T

I just--hmm. I still don't know where to start. LOL

There're so many things I can say, but all I can manage to concretize is this: You've got a way with words that tug on my heartstrings just right. ♥ What's vivid is vivid. What's vague (if there is) is satisfyingly vague enough, with enough concrete details for me to wrap my finger around its vagueness. Uhm, Idek what i'm saying really. Prolly just trying to be profound LOL Your words have that much of an effect on me, I guess? Like a floaty, happy, warm fuzzy feeling swelled up in my chest. :'D

Just to quote my fave part:
"It’s hard because you guys aren’t rubber like me!" he says, whines. “So you get hurt and you don’t bounce back as fast, and sometimes you get all quiet. And I don’t like that. I don’t like when you guys are hurt, or sad. You’re not supposed to be, ever. I hate it. I want to make it stop, but I can’t punch sad in the face. There’s nothing to fight, so how am I supposed to help. I don’t know."

♥♥♥♥♥ Thank you for the wonderful read. ♥♥♥♥♥

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bluewalk September 18 2013, 02:30:25 UTC
Hello!!! It really has been a while! I haven't been too active on LJ recently.

You are as kind as always and I am still unworthy of your praise. Most of the time I feel like my writing is murky at best, but you are very generous to say it's "satisfyingly vague" XD Perhaps I should hire you as my public relations manager ♥♥ And the feelings of floaty, happy, warm fuzziness are completely reciprocated; your comments leave me floored.

Thank you for dropping by, and for the lovely words ♥

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chesuto September 18 2013, 14:55:37 UTC
It sure has been. :) I haven't been on LJ too much lately, either. I'm mostly on Tumblr or Twitter nowadays. lol I actually don't know what made me go back to this fic blog of yours out of the blue, but when the urge came, I immediately rushed towards your blog and started reading. Hahaha. XD

Oh my, I'd be honored to be your PR. ♥♥♥♥♥ XD I'm glad my comments make you feel that happy, too. ;w;

Oh, and thank you for adding me. I am so honored. ;w; ♥
I'll be adding you back, though my LJ doesn't have much content anymore. Hee. ♥

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