Disclaimer: Ever so sorry boys…never happened.
Series: Preordained
Paring: Sean A./Elijah
Summary: AU: Some things are just meant to happen while others are simply ripples off of one small mistake that change us forever. (Read AU Description, and also AN; behind cut)
AU Description: Same as before. (Refer to the “Prologue’s” AN for information
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The way Sean slammed Elijah into the door for that passionate and desperate kiss. The way Elijah could feel the hard bones of Sean's hips showing how he had suffered while Elijah was gone. Good God the sex. It was breathtaking and so HOT! I was lost in it. You described such an intense passion and yet they were still there, humor intact, affection deep as Sean nerviously explored gay sex with Elijah. When Elijah had to stop, overcome, and got Sean ready (desperately) I was holding on to every word and blissed out.
Entertainment tonight was a hoot. You got it perfect and I could just see every detail of this annoying show being played out. The ending though was GREAT..."Bromance or Romance"...ROMANCE!! Its funny because when Sean was touching Elijah he was a bit nervous but it calmed him. He trusted Sean on the red carpet. But what he was feeling showed differently on the screen and the truth was there for everyone to see. Dominic was hysterical. I could really see the fear crawling into Elijah's mind at the end. Was this what Sean wanted or was it going to take away from the film? The ending truly held me at the edge with Sean, after their intense night together, stumbled out saying "We are so fucked." I am hoping he was talking about something else and that he hadn't heard the show. Sounded like a mirror broke or something.
I really and trully hope you keep this coming soon. I love this story. I didn't realize it was a WIP when I started this week and it is unusual for me to reach out to the author to ask if it is finished and I missed the end. You are a wonderful writer.
Hugs you!! Thank you for bringing this back. xoxoxo v
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