Chapter III: Be in my band

Apr 12, 2004 11:09

THIS IS YOUR OPPORTUNITY TO BE IN A BAND ( Read more... )

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DON'T LAUGH hypersleep April 17 2004, 03:18:46 UTC
Go easy on me now... it's past 5am and i'm under the influence of IHOP and Meaghan Vail<< DEADLY COMBINATION...

Verse 1
1.Heard your car pulling in last night
2.Wanted to ask, but it didn’t seem right
3.It's hard to tell where we went wrong(i added one word... so sue me)
4.It’s hard to laugh when the fights are so long

Verse 2
1.It was cold that morning on October ninth
2.I forgive you for not calling, I’ll forget our fight
3.I was told never to wish for love on a star
4.But the way things worked out; I’m happy where you are

Verse 3
1.Now, The city's got glitter but it’s fading fast
2.So, I had to leave to forget about the past
3.But I guess in the long run it worked out the best
4.For me and love, and not the rest

Bridge
1.And there is only one thing I can do
2.Run away, ‘til I run back to you

Chorus
1. Don't look back at the things you've done
2. Don’t keep dreaming of all you could’ve won
3. You've got no angels in your outfield, and the time has come
4. We finished right back where we started from

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Re: DON'T LAUGH bluesbr0 April 17 2004, 09:47:09 UTC
Awesome.

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Re: DON'T LAUGH bluesbr0 April 17 2004, 09:48:50 UTC
I'll have Siler reveiw it to, then we'll determine if any part of it should be kept. Awesome writing though.

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Re: DON'T LAUGH bluesbr0 April 17 2004, 09:49:50 UTC
whats your name, btw

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Re: DON'T LAUGH hypersleep April 17 2004, 14:41:59 UTC
YOU KNOW ME... I WENT TO GHS LAST YEAR AND GRADUATED...
Elizabeth Rehmann... okay maybe you don't know me by name... i'm the girl that keeps coming back to give voice lessons to show choir...
THAT'S ME...
i'm glad you liked it... ;)

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Re: DON'T LAUGH hypersleep April 17 2004, 14:46:44 UTC
oh and you don't have to worry about keeping it or not... i don't care either way... it's yours to do with as ya like... point and laugh... make copies and burn... whatever ya wanna do... i was just bored and all.. ya know how that goes..

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Re: DON'T LAUGH hypersleep April 22 2004, 22:40:21 UTC
Tell me what siler thinks... just intrested to see how people feel about my writing...

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