ficlet: salt and water

[blueraccoon]

Title: salt and water
Author: rebecca
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: R
Summary: fall into the abyss

Comments

[wilde_girl]

Wow! Such powerful use of extended metaphor.

My favourite part: "when he tastes salt on John's lips he does not know if it is John's sweat or his come or the ocean water."

I give you the "Most poetic use of come ever" award. ;)

[blueraccoon]

whee! *hangs it on the wall*

[amireal]

I think that award doesn't get hung so much as splatted. *ducks*

[blueraccoon]

I hate you now.

[amireal]

You love me.

[blueraccoon]

hmph. don't mock the awards i earned for my lovely writing.