FIC: Variables

Feb 21, 2006 00:08

Title: Variables
Author: rebecca
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Stephen/Joshua
Summary: What Drake did--it's not done.
Notes: Part of the Geometry series, this is either a missing scene or a piece that didn't fit in the original story. Takes place between Line of Sight and Right Angle.

This is my (slightly late) birthday present to you, all you amazing ( Read more... )

geometry, joshua/stephen, ncis fic, kink

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ozziebabe February 21 2006, 09:28:32 UTC
Oh yeah...

Uh huh. Yeah. Mmmm.

Er, brain melted.

Happy Birthday *hugs*

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blueraccoon February 22 2006, 02:36:03 UTC
thank you *hugs* and i'm glad you liked.

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twoweevils February 21 2006, 12:44:12 UTC
I liked seeing this interval between "Line of Sight" and "Right Angle". It really contextualized the way Stephen and Joshua responded to Tony turning the discs over to them.

You managed to pack so much emotion into this without tipping into melodrama. The feelings were intense and raw, but never over the top.

And this exchange:

Joshua kissed him again, gently. "What are you?" he asked softly, licking Stephen's lip.

Stephen murmured in pleasure and pressed against him. "Yours," he breathed.

Melted me. Totally. Just...guh!

Lovely work!

M.

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blueraccoon February 22 2006, 02:44:35 UTC
Thank you so much. I liked that exchange myself *g*

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blueraccoon February 22 2006, 02:46:33 UTC
welcome to the series; i'm so glad you're enjoying it. and welcome to my LJ as well!

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pigglet27 February 21 2006, 13:40:55 UTC
Oh yes, yummy. Thank you for sharing. I adore how your characters have both strengths and weaknesses balanced so well. And happy birthday!

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blueraccoon February 22 2006, 03:03:57 UTC
thank you for the birthday wishes! I'm so glad you liked.

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dameange February 21 2006, 17:47:40 UTC
i absolutely LOVE this series. love your omcs and how real they are. thank you so much for writing this. and of course, desperately waiting for the next part.

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blueraccoon February 22 2006, 03:04:31 UTC
:D thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked this.

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