10 DBSK Drabbles
Title: 10 DBSK Drabbles
Pairings: YunJae, HoSu, JaeChun, MinSu, YooSu, YunChun, JaeSu, JaeMin, YooMin, HoMin
Length: Drabble
Rating: Pg-13 (safe, I guess)
Genre: Angst, Romance, Drama, Fluff, Humour
Disclaimer: My cliche plots and words, and yeah, the errors too.
Warning: Written in little times, errors guaranteed and the written work by an author who ( Read more... )
Awe, you put my drabbles to shame. How did you do it? They're great and look so well developed...
The ones that stood out to me were 2, 3, 6, and 8. Can you please, doesn't matter how distant a future it is, continue number 2 as a oneshot. It'd be great as a mini-fic, but if not a oneshot. I really liked the theme to that one and could see it longer. ^_^ I thought 3 was really cute and I had questions on number 6. So, is Yoochun a prostitue? I wanted to know what you meant by "And he becomes that man who loves only him." Did it mean he quit whatever he was doing as a job for Yunho or just that he ended up leaving Yunho, but forever remembering him? (also would be interesting to see more of in the future ;D) Of course you know I love number 8. :D I'd love to see it as a oneshot, but don't know if there is enough in there to make it inot one. You had several sad ones too, hehe, seems it can't be helped for this drabble meme huh. XD
Thanks so much for sharing them. You're great at drabbles and you didn't have many mistakes for being away from writing for so long. ^__^ It's awesome that you could write other pairing and don't just stick with one. I couldn't do that for the drabble thing (it's so hard!) XD Anyway, good job! :)
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aigoo! why you said they're good? ~_~ some drabbles were long, some were short, and some were confusing, and uh, some were cliche. lol
i think it's because of the pressure to write fast i guess. people said i can work better if i'm under pressure. kkk...maybe yeah.....>,<
kkk...glad you liked them! *glomps*
^^
ah! *blushes*
truthfully, i didn't even know how no.2 drabble plot came, i guess because of the song itself. lol
it's too little to continue so i'd to stop there, but yes! i want to continue it to much longer version! lol
kkk...i'll try neh?
^^
kkk...i love that song for no.3 drabble and the lyrics are so lovey dovey so for me, cuteness must be implanted to it. lol ^^
ah...=) for me, no.6 is quite mysterious, like a drabble which doesn't have an ending neh?
cliffhanger or some sort. it's up to the readers to think what kind of ending it has, but for me, chun leaves yun because of his job. i wanted to develop more, but you know, time wouldn't let me. lol
so i was trying to write chun was a person who was paid to make yun to fall for him, but he himself fell for yun instead when he shouldn't have. so when his boss asked him to stop the 'pretending' stuff and because he thinks he can't be that perfect person for yun, he left him but keep remembering him. i wanted to make it a happy ending but the song itself was...uh...sad and the lyrics too so yeah. ^^
aigoo, maybe i should write a happy ending version of it? ^^
lol! i know you would have like no.8 too! kkk... ehem, and again, i love that plot too. *headdesk*
aigoo, why such plot came to me when i'm in the middle of exam!
lol >,< i love it when min takes control! *hides*
sad ones can't be helped. lol i love listening to sad love songs actually. kkk i was actually panicking when no.1 song came out. gosh, the song is angst already, so yeah...^^
v^^v
thanks bb!!!
*glomps*
i think me reading others' fic makes me want to write too...and ehem... i think i'm better in writing drabbles than oneshot/chaptered actually. maybe yeah...
and you don't be sad! you're way better in oneshot/chaptered compared to me, now i remember my hiatus hosu chaptered fic. oh and don't forget your smut! *blushes* lol
oho! just write more drabbles bb! entertain us the readers! kkkk
*glomps*
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Mine were cliche's too, I think it is unavoidable when dealing with a limited amount of time. XD Doesn't mean that it can't be interesting. :)
I'm excited that you want to continue no. 2. Yay! I'll wait for however long it takes you, so don't worry about doing it right now when you're busy. :P
I thought your definition for no. 6 was awesome! I prefer that over what I came up with. :D Hmmm.... I don't know if you should make a happy ending one. I usually like whatever the author wrote originally, so if you originally thought of a sad ending, then keep it. ^_^ It would be interesting to see the explaination you gave me in somewhere in a one-shot for it though. I know with a drabble you weren't able to, but with a oneshot it'd be great. ^_^
LOL, I like it when Min takes control too. XD
I think you do well with one-shots. I can be your beta for any of the ones that you might do in the future in regards to these drabbles (except the Yunjae one, no Yunjae please)! ^^ That's only if you want of course. :) I don't know about your chaptered ones, don't think I've read you doing a chaptered one. (will have to put it on my todo list, especially since it's Hosu XD)
LOL, I don't think my smut is that good. Thanks for the compliment though, hehe. I don't think drabbles are my calling, haha. I tend to get into plots and the limited words to a drabble would kill me. XD So I'll leave drabbles to you then, since you are better at them. :D (Gosh, I need to stop prompting you to write when you have exams. So sorry. Ignore me. Hehe.) Keep studying. :D You have all the time in the world after the exams. ^_^
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yup, gotta finish what i suppose to do and will write like crazy when i finish the exams lol
*glomps*
still, i'll be reading your updates!
(it's my daily dose of caffeine!)
yeah, out of my mind, ain't i?
kkk
p/s: i'll think about the possible sequels' plots!
^^
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