Re: WHAT IS THIS I DONT EVENsou_kiriAugust 4 2010, 18:51:55 UTC
..here is your monster comment. Though having just read eragon22's comment, mine seems so.. unorganized, in comparison xD; Lets see how many comments this will take.. I've written fics shorter than this comment D8
I'm one paragraph in and totally in love with you ;3; Seeing as I didn't know when this would end up as a LJ comment, I'm trying to do it in a notepad as I go.. which could end up enormous, because Jin tripping on his apron string ♥ AND THAT HE'S EVEN IN THE CAFE. I think I knew that anyway, but that doesn't take any awesome away from it ;n; And yes Kame's nose is a bitch to draw D8 I sympathize. , instead of grabbing Jin by the throat or pinning him to the table all good options xD I just fff have no words for how much I love Kame's scary aura going completely unnoticed by Jin and him going along with what Jin's doing ♥
WRIST HE TOUCHED HIS WRIST I already mentioned loving you alot, didn't I ♥♥♥♥ as;kdf the whole of that exchange is just amazing~ ダイヤモンドォ～ッ
Gah, can't keep up with the awesome. I'm enjoying Koki's role far too much xD And poor, banged-up Taguchi like he's about to toss away his cane and start doing backflips ♥ I think Aya mentioned the safety clicking off on guns, but it's really a nice touch~ Oh, God ;_; Hayatooo~ I managed to completely miss that you mentioned him as being in a past couple, so that was a total surprise. the man he's dragging behind him trips over seemingly everything in their path ♥ I love that awful part of Jin's personality coming through so fast that, despite the situation, he's focusing on seeing Kame again. That he wants Kame to come after him and doesn't even think about what that entails or that Kame could be/is dangerous.
Eiii Jin with a headband and flour on his face~ ♥ and a ponytail. eiii ♥ and lol at him wanting to sulk xD Oh, God, Jin with Maru is just fantastic. I did wonder where his involvement would be.. Naka-something-kun~ x3 And again with Jin getting bothered about Kame's behaviour and wanting to see him~
Gah, I just love how Jin's mind wanders when he meets Kame. And that he actually has a preference to how he likes his behaviour.. and that he's hungry xD Only you, Jin ♥ And (yes, I'm just going to list everything back to you though you know full well what you wrote 8D;) that he associates it with a date.. and that you made him claustrophobic *huggles* Back to loving Jin's train of thought x3 For someone scared they're about to die, that's.. just an amazing train of thought XD And there's something kinda weirdly hot about Kame forcing Jin's head down while they're running. Or so Jin says >> ..and he added a turtle to his name, despite everything that's just happened. More ♥♥♥♥♥♥ abuse for you~
lol yes Kame, that's not all that yakuza-like of you to be arguing over if he's your boyfriend or not~ Nice, having Kame use a baseball bat, too xP ..ear cutting off, I'm proud of you x3 And Kame with a cut face isn't a half bad image, either~ ♥ And I like the touch of Kame bothering to straighten himself out before seeing Jin. Oh, Jin, rambling away and not even noticing.. And you, the vodka ♥ The way Jin has seemingly no concept of.. just anything is so lovely. That Kame's aware of how other people would behave around him but Jin just goes straight ahead and gets as close as he wants, and says what he wants to him.. And (gah, this is so unorganized xD;) that there's back story with Hayato. I'm really glad there's a little of their history in there. and looked up at him with those deep, loving eyes of his as he spent hours rocking him into the mattress... ..and that. And that it's so obvious how much Hayato meant to him and he's not just some plot device, even if it makes me feel so very very sad >:
Re: WHAT IS THIS I DONT EVENsou_kiriAugust 4 2010, 18:53:54 UTC
“I could fuck you up so bad,” he whispers, almost against Jin's lips. “I should, too, because no one deserves to look so much like him. And I've been through too much to be tormented like this. Dammit, I should fuck you up...”
There's a long pause as Kamenashi seems to run out of words, and then Jin's voice, quiet and low with intent. “D-Do it.” Holy shit. Yes I needed to quote the whole part. asl;jdns. .. “Do it. Fuck me up. Punish me for what I'm putting you through. And Jin wanted that bit 83; He likes what you did with him~ and the spit >> And his legs around Kame's waist when he's up against a wall.. orz and that he even attempts telling Kame what to do. But gah, you were right that it's more than just sex. Like he should know that he would do anything for him. Gave me ドキドキ in the totally wrong way for the situation >: And him saying 'I love you' is just heartbreaking D; You evil, evil you~~ Koki's ass tattoos came as a welcome distraction from that last scene.. x3;
Gah, can't pick out a part to quote from Kame's next meeting with Jin.. It's such a nice change of pace. And Kame letting his guard down and just being human and enjoying being with Jin, and realizing that he's not a Hayato replacement.. By morning, he's traced every scale on the red dragon tattoo painted on Kame's back... The whole of their two dates was good to read, but scar/piercing-licking besides, that's just ♥ idk who else other than Kame could make a dragon sound erotic..
Sorry Jin kept wanting to change his hair 8D; I can see why that was bothering you now.
it's entirely possible that when he reaches Jin's apartment, he'll find him in his kitchen, singing to himself and happily baking. If that happens, he'll have to kick his ass. Partially for forgetting their date and making him worry, but mostly to stop him from asking why he came over in such a rush and making him admit that he was worried. yakuza!Kame, your imagination is a wonderful thing x3 Gah, love the mention of cicadas ♥
~just Jin and Maru doing a duet is good enough, but Jin all roughed up and Maru a lawyer just somehow makes it all the better xD But Maru awesomeness besides, that's a really nice moment. Kame getting put out of place and being human for a moment askf;ds cause there's something nice about the pattern of Jin being so sweet, Kame starts to change because of him >A> ,and it's so sweet that TaNaka help him along. And just.. gah, everything. That Kame really cares, and can't just be in control of the situation and do everything how he wants. And that Kame gradually figures out how to comfort Jin. And but now he wants to press his forehead to the cold tile floor and beg for Jin's forgiveness. B'aww, and that Kame wants to protect Jin even if it means them not being together.
Just.. gah, there's something so sweet and childish about Jin, that he seems perfectly happy and interested in then living with Kame, despite everything that's happened. He feels like, every once in a while, he catches glimpses of a Kame who's used to having someone by his side, to lean on and in turn support. To share a home and a life with. He highly doubts Kame realizes this about himself, but it's easy for Jin to see in the way Kame sometimes curls himself around him in his sleep, ending up using Jin's shoulder as a pillow and digging his bare feet in between his calves. ;3; relevance *shot*. They just need to get used to each other, and Jin thinks he'd like to stay this close to Kame so they can do that. And again with the cute optimistic Jin~ That warms up to the idea of getting a tattoo pretty fast when he realizes it'll relate to Kame. That's.. so rushed, and like him x3; (and my Jin is saying that Kame just saying 'get in the car' shouldn't be as hot as it is.. Let everyone know that this is my mark, and that I'll protect anyone and anything bearing it with my life. And that. He wants some of that x3)
lol VKei makeover machine~ reminding Kame yet again that the more of a sense of humor he develops, the less everyone seems to understand his jokes. So Kame x3; And Kame's affectionate aswell as lame~ So cute ;3; And asfk;ld why is tattoo licking so hot.
Re: WHAT IS THIS I DONT EVENsou_kiriAugust 4 2010, 18:54:46 UTC
Kame bullying Jin is so.. yeah, it's cute .3.; Jin wants his apron strings pulled x3
Jin's just.. so cute and loyal >: And it says their bed, not Kame's bed. eiii ♥ And fff that's just so wonderfuly him, that he causes so much trouble just by getting excited thinking he could pretend to be Kame.. gah, Jin ♥ GAH, JIN, WITH THE FINGER CUTTING. Love you~ ♥ ..M!Jin does, too x3;
He struggles against the grip Kame has on his wrists above his head, pinning him to the hard surface, but the gangster is all taut muscle under his Armani suit and inked skin, and no matter how much Jin thrashes, he can't break free. Guh ♥ ~and you may possibly have one of the first fics ever where the focus is on the sub's pleasure >: Have I ever mentioned that Kame is a sweetheart for how careful he is with Jin? Probably, about 3000 times, but the more semes I see that just carry on and don't really care how their partner feels (however in love they're supposed to be D8) makes us appreciate it more and more~ Don't need to say how much I love Jin getting bitten.. and scratching up Kame's back, and as;lkd wrapping his legs round him, yes ♥♥ AND THEN THERE WAS LOVE \8D/
And lol Sachiko, possibly not the best idea to get out drawings of Akame when in the same room as them? Just incase.. Gaah I know you said you spent forever on Kame's rant at the end, but it was so well worth it. Everything about it is perfect ♥ Including Jin's "N-No, I...tiara?" x3
..and now I'm tired out XD orz it only took me four days to do this.. I really like Sachiko, btw. When I saw her as a warning I was a little worried exactly what her part would be, but she's great ♥ and makes me feel bad for my lack of patience with drawing xD; I love yakuza!Kame's personality. He's fascinating, because there's something so obviously unbalanced with his mental state but he's still in that position of power (and still has people that listen to him). Guh, and I love love love how much of Jin you got in this ♥ Because I fail and still have so much of our conversation between RP, I found times when you asked if it'd be ok to tone him down a little in regards to him rushing into a serious relationship, and although he's obviously not quite as bad in this, it still comes through so strongly how willing he is to throw everything away for someone he barely knows. Which is stupid, and awesome ♥ That he's claustrophobic, and looks at boobs tiaras, and that you stole his line about when his piercings are healed x3 I was a little dubious when I first saw how this was going to be formated, but it's just amazing. I'm so happy it has parts with our actual boys in (and you got Jin perfectly ♥), but it was a relief reading all of the yakuza stuff and knowing it didn't have real relation to them so I didn't have to feel any guilt for non-loving sex and enjoying the violence~^^;
I don't know if it was entirely intended or not, but He laughs louder, he smiles more, and it almost seems as though the person he was when he was younger is finally starting to show himself again. Or, perhaps it's more that the good is starting to blend with who he's become since suffering through the bad, transforming him into a completely new person. Either way, Jin sometimes can't believe he's been the one to bring about such a change in him. really got to Jin ._. Cause. y'know, that has basically been their situation, without all the yakuza stuff and death and.. you know what I mean XD And now he just loves him and wants to protect him and make him happy all the more~
Re: WHAT IS THIS I DONT EVEN ..last onesou_kiriAugust 4 2010, 18:55:24 UTC
..and as I'm doing this backwards, your A/N~ Firstly, I had no idea you still call me that XD And I'm so glad that doing this has made you happy ♥ If the monster comment and me flailing at you since you posted it hadn't gotten through to you how much I love it, I really, really do, but I'm happy that you enjoyed doing it. Not that you ever seemed unhappy about it when you'd tell me how much you'd written, but I did feel a little guilty that it was taking up so much of your time. I promise I won't curse too much about how long things take to draw, after how long it took to actually write x3; Gah, thank you so much, Tori ♥ I'll definitely atleast have to give you a hug, even if it's not the huge bowling us both over kind.. And Jin loves it, too ♥ He's all Kame's to do whatever he wants with for a day or two in gratitude c:
Lets see how many comments this will take.. I've written fics shorter than this comment D8
I'm one paragraph in and totally in love with you ;3; Seeing as I didn't know when this would end up as a LJ comment, I'm trying to do it in a notepad as I go.. which could end up enormous, because Jin tripping on his apron string ♥ AND THAT HE'S EVEN IN THE CAFE. I think I knew that anyway, but that doesn't take any awesome away from it ;n;
And yes Kame's nose is a bitch to draw D8 I sympathize.
, instead of grabbing Jin by the throat or pinning him to the table all good options xD I just fff have no words for how much I love Kame's scary aura going completely unnoticed by Jin and him going along with what Jin's doing ♥
WRIST HE TOUCHED HIS WRIST I already mentioned loving you alot, didn't I ♥♥♥♥ as;kdf the whole of that exchange is just amazing~
ダイヤモンドォ～ッ
Gah, can't keep up with the awesome. I'm enjoying Koki's role far too much xD And poor, banged-up Taguchi like he's about to toss away his cane and start doing backflips ♥
I think Aya mentioned the safety clicking off on guns, but it's really a nice touch~
Oh, God ;_; Hayatooo~ I managed to completely miss that you mentioned him as being in a past couple, so that was a total surprise.
the man he's dragging behind him trips over seemingly everything in their path ♥
I love that awful part of Jin's personality coming through so fast that, despite the situation, he's focusing on seeing Kame again. That he wants Kame to come after him and doesn't even think about what that entails or that Kame could be/is dangerous.
Eiii Jin with a headband and flour on his face~ ♥ and a ponytail. eiii ♥ and lol at him wanting to sulk xD Oh, God, Jin with Maru is just fantastic. I did wonder where his involvement would be.. Naka-something-kun~ x3 And again with Jin getting bothered about Kame's behaviour and wanting to see him~
Gah, I just love how Jin's mind wanders when he meets Kame. And that he actually has a preference to how he likes his behaviour.. and that he's hungry xD Only you, Jin ♥ And (yes, I'm just going to list everything back to you though you know full well what you wrote 8D;) that he associates it with a date.. and that you made him claustrophobic *huggles* Back to loving Jin's train of thought x3 For someone scared they're about to die, that's.. just an amazing train of thought XD And there's something kinda weirdly hot about Kame forcing Jin's head down while they're running. Or so Jin says >> ..and he added a turtle to his name, despite everything that's just happened. More ♥♥♥♥♥♥ abuse for you~
lol yes Kame, that's not all that yakuza-like of you to be arguing over if he's your boyfriend or not~ Nice, having Kame use a baseball bat, too xP
..ear cutting off, I'm proud of you x3 And Kame with a cut face isn't a half bad image, either~ ♥ And I like the touch of Kame bothering to straighten himself out before seeing Jin.
Oh, Jin, rambling away and not even noticing..
And you, the vodka ♥
The way Jin has seemingly no concept of.. just anything is so lovely. That Kame's aware of how other people would behave around him but Jin just goes straight ahead and gets as close as he wants, and says what he wants to him.. And (gah, this is so unorganized xD;) that there's back story with Hayato. I'm really glad there's a little of their history in there. and looked up at him with those deep, loving eyes of his as he spent hours rocking him into the mattress... ..and that. And that it's so obvious how much Hayato meant to him and he's not just some plot device, even if it makes me feel so very very sad >:
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There's a long pause as Kamenashi seems to run out of words, and then Jin's voice, quiet and low with intent. “D-Do it.” Holy shit. Yes I needed to quote the whole part. asl;jdns. .. “Do it. Fuck me up. Punish me for what I'm putting you through. And Jin wanted that bit 83; He likes what you did with him~ and the spit >> And his legs around Kame's waist when he's up against a wall.. orz and that he even attempts telling Kame what to do.
But gah, you were right that it's more than just sex. Like he should know that he would do anything for him. Gave me ドキドキ in the totally wrong way for the situation >: And him saying 'I love you' is just heartbreaking D; You evil, evil you~~
Koki's ass tattoos came as a welcome distraction from that last scene.. x3;
Gah, can't pick out a part to quote from Kame's next meeting with Jin.. It's such a nice change of pace. And Kame letting his guard down and just being human and enjoying being with Jin, and realizing that he's not a Hayato replacement..
By morning, he's traced every scale on the red dragon tattoo painted on Kame's back... The whole of their two dates was good to read, but scar/piercing-licking besides, that's just ♥ idk who else other than Kame could make a dragon sound erotic..
Sorry Jin kept wanting to change his hair 8D; I can see why that was bothering you now.
it's entirely possible that when he reaches Jin's apartment, he'll find him in his kitchen, singing to himself and happily baking. If that happens, he'll have to kick his ass. Partially for forgetting their date and making him worry, but mostly to stop him from asking why he came over in such a rush and making him admit that he was worried. yakuza!Kame, your imagination is a wonderful thing x3
Gah, love the mention of cicadas ♥
~just Jin and Maru doing a duet is good enough, but Jin all roughed up and Maru a lawyer just somehow makes it all the better xD But Maru awesomeness besides, that's a really nice moment. Kame getting put out of place and being human for a moment askf;ds cause there's something nice about the pattern of Jin being so sweet, Kame starts to change because of him >A> ,and it's so sweet that TaNaka help him along. And just.. gah, everything. That Kame really cares, and can't just be in control of the situation and do everything how he wants. And that Kame gradually figures out how to comfort Jin. And but now he wants to press his forehead to the cold tile floor and beg for Jin's forgiveness. B'aww, and that Kame wants to protect Jin even if it means them not being together.
Just.. gah, there's something so sweet and childish about Jin, that he seems perfectly happy and interested in then living with Kame, despite everything that's happened.
He feels like, every once in a while, he catches glimpses of a Kame who's used to having someone by his side, to lean on and in turn support. To share a home and a life with. He highly doubts Kame realizes this about himself, but it's easy for Jin to see in the way Kame sometimes curls himself around him in his sleep, ending up using Jin's shoulder as a pillow and digging his bare feet in between his calves. ;3; relevance *shot*.
They just need to get used to each other, and Jin thinks he'd like to stay this close to Kame so they can do that. And again with the cute optimistic Jin~ That warms up to the idea of getting a tattoo pretty fast when he realizes it'll relate to Kame. That's.. so rushed, and like him x3; (and my Jin is saying that Kame just saying 'get in the car' shouldn't be as hot as it is.. Let everyone know that this is my mark, and that I'll protect anyone and anything bearing it with my life. And that. He wants some of that x3)
lol VKei makeover machine~ reminding Kame yet again that the more of a sense of humor he develops, the less everyone seems to understand his jokes. So Kame x3; And Kame's affectionate aswell as lame~ So cute ;3;
And asfk;ld why is tattoo licking so hot.
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Jin's just.. so cute and loyal >: And it says their bed, not Kame's bed. eiii ♥ And fff that's just so wonderfuly him, that he causes so much trouble just by getting excited thinking he could pretend to be Kame.. gah, Jin ♥ GAH, JIN, WITH THE FINGER CUTTING. Love you~ ♥ ..M!Jin does, too x3;
He struggles against the grip Kame has on his wrists above his head, pinning him to the hard surface, but the gangster is all taut muscle under his Armani suit and inked skin, and no matter how much Jin thrashes, he can't break free. Guh ♥
~and you may possibly have one of the first fics ever where the focus is on the sub's pleasure >: Have I ever mentioned that Kame is a sweetheart for how careful he is with Jin? Probably, about 3000 times, but the more semes I see that just carry on and don't really care how their partner feels (however in love they're supposed to be D8) makes us appreciate it more and more~
Don't need to say how much I love Jin getting bitten.. and scratching up Kame's back, and as;lkd wrapping his legs round him, yes ♥♥ AND THEN THERE WAS LOVE \8D/
And lol Sachiko, possibly not the best idea to get out drawings of Akame when in the same room as them? Just incase..
Gaah I know you said you spent forever on Kame's rant at the end, but it was so well worth it. Everything about it is perfect ♥ Including Jin's "N-No, I...tiara?" x3
..and now I'm tired out XD orz it only took me four days to do this.. I really like Sachiko, btw. When I saw her as a warning I was a little worried exactly what her part would be, but she's great ♥ and makes me feel bad for my lack of patience with drawing xD;
I love yakuza!Kame's personality. He's fascinating, because there's something so obviously unbalanced with his mental state but he's still in that position of power (and still has people that listen to him).
Guh, and I love love love how much of Jin you got in this ♥ Because I fail and still have so much of our conversation between RP, I found times when you asked if it'd be ok to tone him down a little in regards to him rushing into a serious relationship, and although he's obviously not quite as bad in this, it still comes through so strongly how willing he is to throw everything away for someone he barely knows. Which is stupid, and awesome ♥ That he's claustrophobic, and looks at boobs tiaras, and that you stole his line about when his piercings are healed x3 I was a little dubious when I first saw how this was going to be formated, but it's just amazing. I'm so happy it has parts with our actual boys in (and you got Jin perfectly ♥), but it was a relief reading all of the yakuza stuff and knowing it didn't have real relation to them so I didn't have to feel any guilt for non-loving sex and enjoying the violence~^^;
I don't know if it was entirely intended or not, but He laughs louder, he smiles more, and it almost seems as though the person he was when he was younger is finally starting to show himself again. Or, perhaps it's more that the good is starting to blend with who he's become since suffering through the bad, transforming him into a completely new person. Either way, Jin sometimes can't believe he's been the one to bring about such a change in him. really got to Jin ._. Cause. y'know, that has basically been their situation, without all the yakuza stuff and death and.. you know what I mean XD And now he just loves him and wants to protect him and make him happy all the more~
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Gah, thank you so much, Tori ♥ I'll definitely atleast have to give you a hug, even if it's not the huge bowling us both over kind.. And Jin loves it, too ♥ He's all Kame's to do whatever he wants with for a day or two in gratitude c:
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