*ROLLS ALL OVER YOU* yes ok I'll c&p the flail I already had over it if only to prevent me from having another almost identical one anyway xD
;~~~~~~~~; you have some details in this I swear I haven't told you would be relevant to Jin before WHICH MAKES YOU AND THIS EXTRA AWESOME x33 Though it took me about six reads of his band name to get the Luna Sea pun OTL Ahhh Jin sounds so cute with his roots growing through and pink tips~ I love the build up of his image and how Kame thinks he's someone dangerous and that 'tou-san would disapprove of like that (because it's Jin and a lot of people would buy into it) but then he's all Q_Q and nervous of a 14 year old and precious. Somehow I feel like in their very first meeting, even at that age, Jin's been intimidated by Kame and his sexuality ^^; Which I don't mean in a bad way, but.. more that perhaps in any lifetime, however they met, to some extent that'd just be the dynamic between them x3; I also like that you dealt with Kame's hormones reasonably - a lot of people that write about kids that age either gloss over it entirely or make them totally out of control.
I could be wrong ;; but Kame's attraction to Jin doesn't seem solely physical? Right from the start, before he even gets to know him beyond staring from afar, he seems to be getting warm fuzzies for Jin. And that's really nice, considering in two timelines we have for them already it's Jin that falls first and hopelessly. It seems more an interest in finding someone else that's carrying the burden of feeling different andand.. I don't know, that's a really nice way to come at the subject, considering when they're older there's a lot of complicated class issues that take away that simplicity. But anyway ;; (I LOVE THEM SO MUCH IN ALL 'VERSES ;;)
Ganguro~~ \o/
x33 I love how Kame's willing to throw himself into this to get a chance with Jin (and you almost always at shows get some very normal slightly lost looking guy that's turned up in whatever of their own clothes looked most appropriate, so he fits right in :'D)
The little we see of 'ka-chan she's still lovely~ x3 and eiii Kame with pink hair (and ewww Shibuya station bathrooms D:). Kame was so cute at that age, he'd have looked adorable trying to dress up, and it's so cute that he went to that extent :'D Also the tale of his pink hair and how 'ka-chan would have killed him if he'd done it at home would be a good one to be brought up once they knew each other better x3
Poor Kame and his worrying x33 I love him innocently turning up just wanting to see Jin and just .__.;; when he sees the other fans. And I also love Jin's band being semi-successful :D; I'd never really considered how far into the scene they would have progressed (well, not far enough that they'd need to sleep with fans >> Apart from Pi maybe..) but having a minimal fanbase and stage presence is easily good enough <33 Jin sounds beautiful x3 and Kame is young and adorable and non-judgemental because he cares about them being the same inside and the outside is just (interesting) hints to that and I like that a lot <3 Buuu and I miss lives already ;__; all the crushing and hurting each other is such a wonderful experience ;; Andand 'it’s one of the most exhilarating things Kazuya’s done in his entire life', more than baseball? :DD
HE SUNG TEARS ;;;;;;;;; TEAAAAAAARS ;;;;;;; my baby ;;; That's such a big song to take on ;A; Toshi's voice is so different to his, too, it'd sound so different if he did it it'd be wonderful ;~; and he and Pi playing it together (and doing hide tributes makes the pink theme more relevant ;A;) buuu I WANT THIS TO HAPPEN ;; I hope some of Jin's past was really like this ;; I should ask him >>;
Hee almost Pin fanservice~ x33 with Kame watching, there's a strange thought~ And again, I love how Kame's thinking about him~ Jin's so shy and introvert, I love that Kame could take such an interest in him without Jin even realising.
part 2 ;; (this is nostalgic xD)shuu_creamNovember 4 2013, 21:25:20 UTC
Ah Kame ;; after live sweaty clothes and being cold, I feel you. But despite his worries when it comes to the logistics of taking Jin aside to confess to him, considering their ages I love how forward Kame is about it x3 a lot of people would be too nervous to approach someone that much older (and seemingly cooler? xP) than them, but he doesn't even think about it~ He's just set on telling him x3
lol~ 'I went to your show look my hair means I like you :D'
>: Jin getting all closed off when the subject of home comes up.. I wonder if to anyone else that reads these AU's it's frustrating how hinted to all of this stuff is but it's not covered ^^; Oh, but I wondered~ Jin's skirt, was it based on something particular, or..? I was very reminded of the fact real!Jin wore a floor lengh skirt for a guitar perf once :D; Heehee, I do really like how different this makes their potential seem~ If this was a starting point and we hadn't worked backwards to it I would never guess how different they are from it together x3
Ah and I like where you ended it~ I'd like to think that Kame also didn't confess because he read Jin's discomfort and thought better of it.. so it's a nice ending~ because yeah, Jin definitely would reject him out of fear at that point D; and then as we know it lead to beautiful things~ x3 (though I wonder how Jin's fanclub would take to him getting a boyfriend :'D)
Thank you so so much~~ This was such a surprise ;A; and the detail and feeling you've got into it is wonderful. It's really nice to see things from Kame's side, and it's so sweet and eiiii~ x33 Sometime we need to discuss what would follow properly <33
AND HAVE ADDITIONAL LOVE AND A BIG *SQUIIIIIIIISH* This 'verse and the few fics starting to make it an (almost) reality are so precious and adorable and wonderful, and how did we even end up fleshing out an AU past within an AU? x3
;~~~~~~~~; you have some details in this I swear I haven't told you would be relevant to Jin before WHICH MAKES YOU AND THIS EXTRA AWESOME x33 Though it took me about six reads of his band name to get the Luna Sea pun OTL
Ahhh Jin sounds so cute with his roots growing through and pink tips~ I love the build up of his image and how Kame thinks he's someone dangerous and that 'tou-san would disapprove of like that (because it's Jin and a lot of people would buy into it) but then he's all Q_Q and nervous of a 14 year old and precious. Somehow I feel like in their very first meeting, even at that age, Jin's been intimidated by Kame and his sexuality ^^; Which I don't mean in a bad way, but.. more that perhaps in any lifetime, however they met, to some extent that'd just be the dynamic between them x3; I also like that you dealt with Kame's hormones reasonably - a lot of people that write about kids that age either gloss over it entirely or make them totally out of control.
I could be wrong ;; but Kame's attraction to Jin doesn't seem solely physical? Right from the start, before he even gets to know him beyond staring from afar, he seems to be getting warm fuzzies for Jin. And that's really nice, considering in two timelines we have for them already it's Jin that falls first and hopelessly. It seems more an interest in finding someone else that's carrying the burden of feeling different andand.. I don't know, that's a really nice way to come at the subject, considering when they're older there's a lot of complicated class issues that take away that simplicity. But anyway ;; (I LOVE THEM SO MUCH IN ALL 'VERSES ;;)
Ganguro~~ \o/
x33 I love how Kame's willing to throw himself into this to get a chance with Jin (and you almost always at shows get some very normal slightly lost looking guy that's turned up in whatever of their own clothes looked most appropriate, so he fits right in :'D)
The little we see of 'ka-chan she's still lovely~ x3 and eiii Kame with pink hair (and ewww Shibuya station bathrooms D:). Kame was so cute at that age, he'd have looked adorable trying to dress up, and it's so cute that he went to that extent :'D Also the tale of his pink hair and how 'ka-chan would have killed him if he'd done it at home would be a good one to be brought up once they knew each other better x3
Poor Kame and his worrying x33 I love him innocently turning up just wanting to see Jin and just .__.;; when he sees the other fans. And I also love Jin's band being semi-successful :D; I'd never really considered how far into the scene they would have progressed (well, not far enough that they'd need to sleep with fans >> Apart from Pi maybe..) but having a minimal fanbase and stage presence is easily good enough <33 Jin sounds beautiful x3 and Kame is young and adorable and non-judgemental because he cares about them being the same inside and the outside is just (interesting) hints to that and I like that a lot <3 Buuu and I miss lives already ;__; all the crushing and hurting each other is such a wonderful experience ;; Andand 'it’s one of the most exhilarating things Kazuya’s done in his entire life', more than baseball? :DD
HE SUNG TEARS ;;;;;;;;; TEAAAAAAARS ;;;;;;; my baby ;;; That's such a big song to take on ;A; Toshi's voice is so different to his, too, it'd sound so different if he did it it'd be wonderful ;~; and he and Pi playing it together (and doing hide tributes makes the pink theme more relevant ;A;) buuu I WANT THIS TO HAPPEN ;; I hope some of Jin's past was really like this ;; I should ask him >>;
Hee almost Pin fanservice~ x33 with Kame watching, there's a strange thought~ And again, I love how Kame's thinking about him~ Jin's so shy and introvert, I love that Kame could take such an interest in him without Jin even realising.
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lol~ 'I went to your show look my hair means I like you :D'
>: Jin getting all closed off when the subject of home comes up.. I wonder if to anyone else that reads these AU's it's frustrating how hinted to all of this stuff is but it's not covered ^^; Oh, but I wondered~ Jin's skirt, was it based on something particular, or..? I was very reminded of the fact real!Jin wore a floor lengh skirt for a guitar perf once :D;
Heehee, I do really like how different this makes their potential seem~ If this was a starting point and we hadn't worked backwards to it I would never guess how different they are from it together x3
Ah and I like where you ended it~ I'd like to think that Kame also didn't confess because he read Jin's discomfort and thought better of it.. so it's a nice ending~ because yeah, Jin definitely would reject him out of fear at that point D; and then as we know it lead to beautiful things~ x3 (though I wonder how Jin's fanclub would take to him getting a boyfriend :'D)
Thank you so so much~~ This was such a surprise ;A; and the detail and feeling you've got into it is wonderful. It's really nice to see things from Kame's side, and it's so sweet and eiiii~ x33 Sometime we need to discuss what would follow properly <33
AND HAVE ADDITIONAL LOVE AND A BIG *SQUIIIIIIIISH* This 'verse and the few fics starting to make it an (almost) reality are so precious and adorable and wonderful, and how did we even end up fleshing out an AU past within an AU? x3
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