[Fic: Hockey RPS] Burning Oneself Out; Ryan Malone/Mike Smith; NC-17

Aug 09, 2012 00:51

For boltschick2612, who is responsible for giving me Ryan Malone/Mike Smith *feelings*. Takes place in her Everyone Has a Secret-verse, and encompasses that story, as well as Hello, Hello, Remember Me?, and I'm Everything you Can't Control. I suppose this could be read as a stand alone, but I think it works better as a companion piece ( Read more... )

rp: mike smith, rps: hockey, rps: team: tampa bay lightning, pairing: ryan malone/mike smith, *writing: fanfiction: hockey rpf/rps, rating: nc-17, rp: ryan malone, rps: team: coyotes, friends list, brain breakage

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blueabsinthe August 10 2012, 02:37:18 UTC
Yay! So glad you liked it :D

I'd be up for another round of back and forth. It's always fun :D

I kind of thought both of them would be a bit unsure on how to proceed after that Pittsburgh night. I think you kind of alluded to it with Ryan telling Mike the whole situation was new to them.

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blueabsinthe August 10 2012, 02:38:58 UTC
Haha, I don't think I could blame anyone for fangirling over Ryan's eyes. They're quite pretty.

To be honest, I've always had a thing for blue eyes. I think it's the opposites attract thing (at least for me, it is Xd).

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psharp10 August 9 2012, 09:32:16 UTC
Oh my god. Oh My God. OH MY GOD.

I love you! I love you and boltschick2612 and Mike and Ryan and I hate you all for giving me all these feelings about the Bolts! Dammit, I'm a Caps fan not a Bolts >_< But for some reason, ever since you two have been mauling me with Rangers and Bolts fics, I don't even know! UGH! Why are you all so awesome?

I love the way you express Smitty's and Bugsy's feelings. And this fic is so well written that you can actually somewhat feel what they're going through...amazing job (as always!) <3 :)

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psharp10 August 9 2012, 11:08:32 UTC
I don't mind the 'Canes because of Sasha and Staalsy and Skinner and Wardo and basically a lot of players, so yeah. But I agree, they're all great teams! You're welcome <3

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blueabsinthe August 10 2012, 02:41:22 UTC
Aww, thanks so much! ♥

Haha, that's what we do, we give others *feelings* about other NHL teams! She gave me Bolts feels (but, Salo is one of my favourite defense men, so I guess I was kind of halfway there already).

The Caps are okay in my book. Alzner being a local boy & him having a personal connection to my mom.

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boardnow August 13 2012, 22:47:57 UTC
this is unbelievably beautiful! it's like something i know i shouldn't have but can't quit! really!

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blueabsinthe August 14 2012, 02:06:22 UTC
Thanks so much!

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quenchmysoul August 14 2012, 02:37:44 UTC
Gah ... I freaking love you!

The description of the way Ryan kisses is absolutely breathtaking, and the way you write the circularity they both feel is just gorgeous.

The description of Ryan's eyes is beautiful. My favourite was how you said they were cornsilk blue. ♥

{just ignore the Yzerman icon I'm using, seeing as how I don't have a TBL one^^;}

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blueabsinthe August 14 2012, 05:41:00 UTC
Aww, bb! Thank you so, so much! ♥

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