[Fic: Hockey RPS] One's Not Half Two. It's Two are Halves of One; NC-17
Don't worry, there's more after this, I promise! *g* Enjoy. ♥
Fourteenth in the Hide the Night-verse
Disclaimer: None of this is true. Any resemblance to existing places, and or names is entirely coincidental. No harm or offense intended. Title from the E.E. Cummings poem of the same name.
Warnings: Google translated Swedish and French, mild ( Read more... )
Fourteenth in the Hide the Night-verse
Disclaimer: None of this is true. Any resemblance to existing places, and or names is entirely coincidental. No harm or offense intended. Title from the E.E. Cummings poem of the same name.
Warnings: Google translated Swedish and French, mild ( Read more... )
Your visit to Hank was as painful to read as I'm sure it was for you, Brad. The agonizing admission of keeping your eyes open made me cry, too. But then the wonderful moment when Hank finally says in English, "I think I love you" and he makes you say it, say it for both of you to hear loud and clear. You both walked through the uncertainty and the heat of your making love was one of the best and most beautifully described I've ever read. I also got the feeling that Vinny had never made love to Brad in such a caring and tender way. Thank you for such brilliant writing and while I could see it end with this fourteenth part, I would love to read a hundred more! I watched the game with 99 overtimes last night, and the interview with Brad right after the game had me literally panting. He deserves the absolute best there is.
I feel for Vinny, too, conflicted and needy and wanting as he is. I just think in his life as it now is, he could never give Brad what Brad deserves. Perhaps in a future part Vinny can find another married Lightning player to share his love and sexual heat with.
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Their making love scene took forever to write, but I'm so glad you liked it!
And, augh, that game was the best! ♥
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