Restaurant Reviews
Sarah's mediterranian grill & market.
This was a little hard to read. I felt like I was reading a menu. It didn't interest me at all in the restaurant. She also doesn't tell the reader that you can shop there. I sort of figured it out from her vaguely mentioning and the name of the restaurant. She should talk a little more about what we can find in it.
In Bess's bistro review the writer makes sure to describe the facility and atmosphere. She mentions the servers and their friendliness. She starts off really good but I found myself not being able to finish the review because, once again, I felt as if I were reading a really complicated menu.
This was a little hard to read. I felt like I was reading a menu. It didn't interest me at all in the restaurant. She also doesn't tell the reader that you can shop there. I sort of figured it out from her vaguely mentioning and the name of the restaurant. She should talk a little more about what we can find in it.
In Bess's bistro review the writer makes sure to describe the facility and atmosphere. She mentions the servers and their friendliness. She starts off really good but I found myself not being able to finish the review because, once again, I felt as if I were reading a really complicated menu.