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blue_mystiq

Chapter III

Apr 02, 2007 14:08

Dramatis Personae

Rahne (Gina Gershon): The Jedi Exile. Nisse female.
Kreia (Kate Mulgrew): Her mysterious benefactor. Human female.
Atton Rand (John Barrowman): A rogue of uncertain loyalty. Human male.
T3-M4: A faithful helper. Utility droid.

( In which the Exile flees Peragus... )

Comments 14

vureoelt April 3 2007, 03:04:54 UTC

The snap-hiss of an igniting lightsaber surprises all of them.

Them... and me! Lightsabers being a big deal for Jedi, I'm surprised and intrigued that you decided to bring them out much earlier. Interesting colour choices, too.

"Oh we are so frakked," Atton exclaims under his breath.

I guess Atton would fit in with the fighter pilots of BSG...

If anyone's going to kill you, it's going to be me.

Uh, what? Sorry, but this threw me. I completely don't understand the reasoning for thinking this.

pattern_spider April 3 2007, 15:06:53 UTC

Well, my Revan used purple blades, and given the sheer number of lightsabre collected in KotOR1, stashing a few around the place for emergencies made sense. Whether Kreia's balde was her own or one of Revan's spares is not somthing I've decided, though it is perhaps telling to note that the pic of Revan on Wiki/Wokkiepedia shows Revan posed with a red and a purple blade.

As for the comment, you'll notice that Rahne seems somewhat on the snarky side/sarcastic side at the moment. It's also playing with what we know happens at the end of the game, if not necessarily the end of this story...

vureoelt April 4 2007, 00:45:27 UTC

Ah... true, having a few tucked away wouldn't be bad, although I found it practical to put the extra gear in Suvam's hands.

Yeah, I realize that. I guess it just seems like a really sharp spike of irritation, to me, compared to Exile's previous interactions with Kreia. For the most part, her caustic side has been mostly directed at Atton.

blue_mystiq April 4 2007, 05:20:23 UTC

Tweaked it a little.

Thread 5

anonymous April 3 2007, 04:39:27 UTC

Finally, someone is writing a good Kotor 2 fic. Thank you and please keep writing

pattern_spider April 3 2007, 15:08:03 UTC

Thanks! :)

An don't be shy!

jade_shiseido April 8 2007, 03:43:50 UTC

Shy, but still smitten with what you've written. BTW, your casting director deserves a raise - Kate Mulgrew and Gina Gershon are a perfect fit for the story ;) Any chance Kelly Hu will appear as Visas and possibly Rahne's love interest; I gotta soft spot for redeemed, sultry voiced sith.

pattern_spider April 8 2007, 08:06:46 UTC

Heh. I think you need to take a peek at this journal's "recent" page

Thread 6

anonymous April 12 2007, 23:21:30 UTC

I have to say I've searched for fanfic on a more femslash note on KPTPR 1 and 2 ( havent played 3) and I was heartened to find someone actaly made a decent job of portraying the Exil. ( casting is great I too actaly thought of Kate for Kreia and your choice for Atton is great! my Exile would have been katie sacopgh(sp....new BSG Starbuck) amanda tapping I chose the unruly haired blonde) anyway this is well done the plote we all know but you've managed to place it in a very dinamic role ( love the fact the snarkiness placed in there Atton anoyed me though not as much as Carth in the 1st game. I do look forward to more instalments with eagerness.

Elizabeth Carter

elizabethcarter April 12 2007, 23:21:58 UTC

pattern_spider April 14 2007, 19:35:19 UTC

Yeah, I can see them doing it.

There's definitely more snark and friction planned for the future