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FIC: The Carriage held but just Ourselves (Pt. 4/10)

Sep 13, 2009 15:36

Title: The Carriage held but just Ourselves (Pt. 4/10)
Author: blue_fjordsRating: PG-13 ( Read more... )

tw: ianto, tw: jack, tw: gwen, tw: owen, au, tw: tosh, crime novel, tw: kathy swanson, tw: andy, fic

Comments 32

talkingtothesky September 13 2009, 20:34:04 UTC

This keeps getting better and better. :D Love the sharp dialogue in the first part, and the even faster pace of the second. ♥

blue_fjords September 15 2009, 10:26:55 UTC

Thank you! I'd been looking forward to introducing Owen into the mix, and he's always a bit sharp. And then it was totally time for some action!

wynkat1313 September 13 2009, 21:26:57 UTC

wow. great chapter!

blue_fjords September 15 2009, 11:10:46 UTC

Thanks! ::hugs you::

topgeargirl2 September 14 2009, 02:00:20 UTC

This was a great chapter

blue_fjords September 15 2009, 11:11:15 UTC

Thanks, sweetheart!

esteliohan September 14 2009, 09:52:54 UTC

I just wanted to say how much I'm loving this. You're doing such a fantastic job setting the scene and the characters are all so wonderfully fleshed out. Oh and the pacing! Perfect. Looking forward to more.

blue_fjords September 15 2009, 19:04:23 UTC

Thanks so much! The pace is going to slow down again for the next chapter, but hopefully not too torpid!

I'm really glad you're enjoying it!

nox_caelum September 14 2009, 14:22:33 UTC

Brilliant chapter, very exciting. Looking forward to more.

blue_fjords September 15 2009, 19:05:15 UTC

I am getting on to writing it! Thanks for the encouragement!