Fic [Late Coming]

[blue_eyesgirl]

Title: Late Coming
Rating: NC-17
Beta: live_with_love
Disclaimer: Bleach is not mine.
Pairing: Shuuhei/Izuru
Warning/Spoilers: Improper use of hot springs
Word Count: 784
Author's Notes: My fic for the ShuuKira Valentine's Exchange~ For yukika_byaren who gave me the prompts: the moon, hot springs and mango. Unfortunately I didn't manage to work mango in

Comments

[ceestar]

Weeee, Taichou, that was so cute~
Ooh Shuuhei you stupid boy, Izuru just wants to have lunch with you and you're going to make him make the bentos? Lazy thing. *huggles him*

Happy Valentines Day, Taichou!

[blue_eyesgirl]

Nah it's just cos he likes Izu's cooking so much ♥

You too Cee-chan <3

[barukode]

I love the image that You create of Kira in the springs when Hisagi gets there. It is nice to see blondie relaxing every now and then [:
I also love the relationship that they have. You write them as being so comfortable with each other, which is really adorable to see. I like to imagine that this is the way that they always are: strong and diligent for their squads and for Kubo, and then when they are off-camera (LOL) they drink and relax and have sex in the spa ^^

Thanks for sharing, Dearie!
Happy Valentine's Day ♥

[blue_eyesgirl]

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment ♥

I love writing these two so much and I just can't write anything for them except this kind of thing, having them so close XDD

You're welcome
And the same to you =D

[yukika_byaren]

Ooooooh yay!! Just what I ordered!! Thank you so much for writing this. It's okay about the mango, that was just a random insert.

I love how they're so comfortable around each other. As you said "the edges of their reiatsu meeting and meshing together comfortably as if they’d been doing it for centuries." Kya! I'm going all girly and fluffy over this.

Also, the equality shown in not only how they talk and interact but also in how they get off is a really lovely touch to this fic. Aaeee! They're just perfect!

[blue_eyesgirl]

I did think mango flavoured lube but Izuru wouldn't let me go that far for improper use of a hot spring XDDD

I have a bit of a thing for reiatsu and how if two people are really close it just kind of tangles together sort of another intimate way of them becoming one, I'm a bit sappy like that XDD

I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much ♥

[yukika_byaren]

The reiatsu was a really nice touch. I love it =) Sappy is good!!

[kwansan]

"Yeah, your dork though."
Oh, Shuuhei XD

You've portrayed the harmony between these two really well in this fic. From when they first met, through their conversation, and even as they satisfy each other's needs. It's perfect ♥

[blue_eyesgirl]

As if he hadn't proved how much a dork he was already |D

Waaah thank you so much ♥

[winteraconite]

Oh, God, I love how Shuu doesn't even try to defend himself when Izuru calls him a dork!

"Hot springs" has got to be one of the better prompts out there! 8D

Great work!

Thank you so, so much for participating in this activity and making this year's Valentine's Day extra awesome! ♥

[blue_eyesgirl]

He's given up XDDD It was either dork or cute he decided dork was a bit more manly

Thank you ♥

And you're very very welcome I can't wait for next year already XDDD