Merlin beta needed

[blue_eyed_1987]

I'm in the process of writing a (hopefully) short, (<1000 words) Merlin/Gwaine modern AU pwp (NC-17) and I'd like a second set of eyes, if anyone is willing? My porn-fu hasn't come out to play since the pthon, and I'm slightly tipsy, so any sort of critique would be much appreciated.