Real life

[blue_dolphin88]

Life is so awkward
Hatred and angst everywhere
Is there any place to run away?
No one knew that

Listen to your conscience
Wishing for a miracle
Hope there's a magic wand
To change this world

I'm gonna to find a place
That I could see a peace of love
To find an everlasting friendship
And live without doubt

I'm gonna to find a place
Where I could find a loyalty

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[rade_zahitya]

There are places to run to
A place, where everyone shall know
a place with no hatred, only joy
where awkwardness shatters in pieces..

Listen to your conscience
you shall know your desire
wishing for a miracle,
the blessings of the oracle

You will find that place
where everyone seek the peace of love
You will find friendship
And live without doubt

You WILL find that place
with no other room but for loyalty
living life where everything is free

You will find the place you want
because fellowship is like a ship
sailing through betrayal and awkwardness
but arrives with friendship arose ^^

[blue_dolphin88]

Hikz"..
Thankz kawand..^^
saiia terharu..

puisi d balaz pake puisi..^^

[rade_zahitya]

nggak lah...that is the least I can do to praise your amazing talent...hmhm

[blue_dolphin88]

Hwaa...
Thank you..^^

But I'm not as amazing as you think...
U jauh lebih amazinng dari gw...
hehe..^^

[rade_zahitya]

hmm setelah g baca ulank, puisi kita bdua tuh nyambung ya? kalo lu baca puisi lu trus baca puisi g sebagai gema untuk tiap baitnya: misalny:

Life is so awkward (There are places to run to)
Hatred and angst everywhere (A place, where everyone shall know)
Is there any place to run away? (a place with no hatred, only joy)
No one knew that (where awkwardness shatters in pieces..)

Listen to your conscience (Listen to your conscience)
Wishing for a miracle (wishing for a miracle,)
Hope there's a magic wand ((you shall know your desire))
To change this world ( with the blessings of the oracle)

I'm gonna to find a place (You will find that place)
That I could see a peace of love (where everyone seek the peace of love)
To find an everlasting friendship (You will find friendship)
And live without doubt

yang dalem kurung itu kayak gemanya, jhadi dibacain setelah bait puisi lu dibaca...

cocok juga ya wkwkkw

[blue_dolphin88]

wkwkwk..
iya jg y...
paz bgd bz nyambung gtu...
haha..^^