Sam was not a Boyscout

Mar 20, 2010 13:09

Title: Knot prepared
Summary: Sam really likes to be prepared, but having all the right tools is no guarantee you’ll be safe.
Word count: 1,200
Rated: pg-13 (Language, violence)
Notes:Set post-S3; Spoilers through “No Rest for the Wicked”
Genre: Gen, angst
Characters: Sam, Ruby, mention of Dean
Beta: Yes, I probably should have used one.
A/N: for spnpromptcake , ( Read more... )

spnpromptcake, spn, gen, fic, s3, sam pov, angst, dance monkey dance

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crevanfox March 20 2010, 21:19:44 UTC
I feel like this fic deserves better than a simple brilliant, or I really liked this, but I can't come up with anything more insightful, so brilliant, I really liked this.

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blubird_pie March 21 2010, 05:12:54 UTC
Aww, thank you! I'm glad that you liked, I enjoyed writing it too. The prompt comm is actually lots of fun, I'm hoping that someone else did this prompt. Everyone comes up with such different stuff!

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borgmama1of5 March 21 2010, 00:54:38 UTC
Oh, this was brilliant and it made me cry!

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blubird_pie March 21 2010, 05:02:28 UTC
Thanks! I kind of feel like I should stop bothering to label my fic as "angst" and just let it be a given, considering my track record ;)

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sandymg March 21 2010, 01:27:46 UTC
The power of a few well choosen words. Really well done.

This: Cause I’m dead, college boy, Dean sneers, suddenly vicious. And don’t think I’ve forgotten who to blame for that.

--- Was just dead on Sam.

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blubird_pie March 21 2010, 05:10:54 UTC
I'm glad that you liked it! The Sam-as-Dean voice was my favorite part :) Poor, angsty Sam!

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lexhibition March 21 2010, 13:36:25 UTC
This is chilling sad. I love Sam's drive for revenge - he's not going to die here, he's still got to kill Lilith - and the way Ruby sort of - not quite but almost - fills the hole that Dean's left, is there to watch his back and keep his mind on the game. She even calls him 'bitch'. It fits in so well with Sam's Season 4 characterization. Really great, and you've got a good tone going in the action sequences!

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blubird_pie March 21 2010, 20:24:36 UTC
Oh good! Action scenes sort of worry me. I'm really pleased that I got that season 4 feel to it, too- one of the things I love about SPN fic is that there are such distinct things going on character-wise at the different points, and the relationships change so much over time. Thank you for commenting on it!

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redrikki March 21 2010, 16:28:26 UTC
Oh, Sammy. You poor, fucked-up boy. I loved his head!Dean and how Sam knows how damaged that makes him. Nice use of Ruby and the way she inserted herself into the hole Dean left behind.

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blubird_pie March 21 2010, 20:19:07 UTC
*pats Sam* yeah, I think that he would be the sort that sees exactly how low he's falling, though it only makes the fact that he can't stop that much worse. I'm glad that you liked head!Dean and Ruby!

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