This got bloated enough to split into two parts, so hopefully it's not cut in a weird spot. Feedback is highly appreciated.
Also,
this has always bothered me, ever since I first played the beginning of the game and thought, "wasn't his voice deeper before?"
Title: Prisoner of Fate (
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Characters: Basch, Vayne, Gabranth
Overall Rating: R
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(and I hope you've already finished the game, if not, sorry for telling things from the ending!)
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Of course I love the way you have written Vayne. :P That's a given.
Both parts of this fic are really strong pieces and I really hop to read more of this soon!
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Thank you! All of my obsessing over a character at least has some payoff when I'm trying to write him.
Vayne is going to be central to the story, so I hope I can do him justice! It's hard to write him because he's not evil, or even all that crazy (on a scale of Hojo to Kefka, say). He's a manipulative bastard who has a grand plan, and doesn't have tremendous scruples about how to get the rest of the world in line with his vision. I can respect that. I want to make him somewhat sympathetic while preserving his overwhelming arrogance.
Anyway, I'm almost done chapter 3 in a burst of inspiration. Basch gets the stuffing beat out of him, repeatedly. D:
Thank you for the compliments! ♥
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