Because you live. But very few, love

Nov 04, 2011 19:31

Title: Because you live. But very few, love 
Pairing: Myungsoo/Sungyeol 
Rating: PG-13
Length: One-shot, 5,001
A/N: Beta-ed by the amazing  kiccy and my birthday present for  aurelynn

Sungyeol is a dreamer and every day his head is full with ever-changing shapes and people and impressions. )

pairing: myungsoo/sungyeol, fandom: infinite, rating: pg-13

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sven2ity November 5 2011, 16:30:01 UTC
/CRYING RN
/CRYING FOREVER

WAE YOU DIS AMAZING PURSON?

I. I. I can't even. With the imagery and lingering mystery and quiet sting of bitterness and soft melancholy and I /sob what is this constricting thing called language that is unable to express my thoughts properly? ლ(ಥへಥლ)

COPY-PASTE SPAZZ TIME IS NOW

He laughs with his eyes closed and soul open

Omg this line. This line. It's so beautiful it tears at my heart and just ugh what a wonderful way to describe Yeollie I can't /sobs

People live and walk and never look around- they never notice Sungyeol with his cold coffee and warm hands and voice that hums the softest of melodies- the one that tells about love and happiness and just how fleeting those emotions really are.

This is so true and beautiful and gah you are perfect.

He’s a mystery- a mystery with eyes of cinnamon flavored chocolate and hair of crow black feathers.

Why are you so good at poetic descriptions? WHY.

Their rules and principles crash and burn and eliminate each-other. It has always been the opposites that attract.

/incoherent

They’re toying with each-other and as if that’s not enough they decide to stop by and grab another pair of hearts and make them love and hurt and then do it all over again- just because. Just because this reality they’re living in is cruel and unforgivable and they’re not supposed to be the only ones, Myungsoo reasons.


Okay, now I'll (hopefully) make some kind of sense. So, I feel kind of like Myungsoo and Sungyeol are these cupid-esque creatures? Or something... They're not immortal, but reincarnated, and apparently they don't become what they are until later on in life, and there's rules and enforcers of those rules. I tried really hard to understand all the things between the lines OTL

And of course the story itself is heart wrenching and wonderful, you write amazingly and I'm awed. I would say more but my brain is fried and I have to leave soon T~T

<3

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bloodyrose2442 November 13 2011, 18:55:27 UTC
Baby come here so I can squish you to death ♥

Dear you are probably my most favorite commenter seriously- I love your flailing and the quoting and the gifs and just... (though you really abuse crying Woohyun xD)

You are the second person with the cupids- seriously people I love you and all of you read in between the lines so accurately (which probably only means i'm quite obvious) but I had never ever though of cupids until i read your comments- I myself don't even know what Myungsoo and Sungyeol are in this fic~ I'm seriously considering a contiation of some sort that will focus mainly on unraveling this new fantasy species that I have created haha~

I just want to say a very, very big thank you to you ♥

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